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It is important for all cities and towns to have outdoor public places like parks and squares? do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, we know that what is today’s generation. Today’s generation is more active and aware of the health and education system. The government is providing new facilities in all cities and towns. In the following paragraph, I shall put my argument to support my opinion and I am agreeing with this statement. There are plenty of providing facilities by authorities of the development officer. Moreover, there are many facilities for using people such as beautiful garden, outdoor game zoon, good ways, straight- lights, vehicle parking areas, etc. On the other hand, people are using these types of facilities day-by-day and they feel better because they know that importance. Therefore, these types of solutions make dazzling of city and town. Some cities and villages provide many health facilities just like gyms, hospitals, free medicine, and more and people should use free medical for their health good. Mostly, these types of facilities provide only in the cities area. To begin with, the most significant reason many towns do not provide these types of facilities is that that the village does not develop. As a consequence, people are not able to get many facilities of their town and because of they have to face some reasons. Firstly, they cannot get medical facilities and increase death ratio and also illness. Secondly, they cannot access education so the level of literacy increases. They cannot get any infrastructure type of facilities so they can be deprived of civil structures. To recapitulate, people can use government project development facilities and they should live freer and happier. People should do maintain all provided facilities and keep clean our city and village.
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Today
’s generation is more active and aware of the health and education system. The
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government
is providing new facilities in all
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cities
and
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towns
. In the following paragraph, I shall put my argument to support my
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opinion and
I
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am agreeing
with this statement.

There are
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plenty
of providing facilities by authorities of the development officer.
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, there are
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many
facilities for using
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people
such as
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beautiful
garden, outdoor game
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zoon
,
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good
ways, straight- lights, vehicle parking areas, etc.
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,
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people
are using these
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types
of facilities
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day-by-day and
they feel better
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because
they know that importance.
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, these
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types
of solutions
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make
dazzling of city and
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town
.
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cities
and villages provide
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many
health facilities
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just
like gyms, hospitals, free medicine, and more and
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people
should
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use
free medical for their health
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good
.
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, these
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types
of facilities provide
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only
in the
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cities
area.

To
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with, the most significant reason
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many
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towns
do not provide these
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types
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that that
the village does not develop. As a consequence,
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people
are not able to
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get
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many
facilities of their
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town
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, they cannot
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get
medical facilities and increase death ratio and
also
illness.
Secondly
, they cannot access education
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so
the level of literacy increases. They cannot
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get
any infrastructure
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type
of facilities
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so
they can
be deprived
of civil structures.

To recapitulate,
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people
can
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use
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government
project development
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facilities and
they should
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live
freer and happier.
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should do maintain all provided facilities and
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keep
clean our city and village.
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IELTS essay It is important for all cities and towns to have outdoor public places like parks and squares?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
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