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The Internet is important

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The Internet is a great way to communicate. Thanks to the Internet, communication is really easy and available to people all over the world with a smartphone or a computer. People even can talk face to face with each other by using video calls. Besides, we have the chance to make friends through social networks like Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter, . . . We keep up with our friends’ daily life through pictures or statuses that they update on their social network. Especially, in COVID-19, the Internet is more vital than ever. We need it to work from home, study online, keep in touch because of lockdown. The Internet provides huge amount of information. We can search for anything we want to know within seconds. We can get news immediately by using E-journal instead of reading newspapers. Learning online is also easy because there are mountains of online books, libraries, classes, . . . Thanks to the Internet, we have a lot of things to relax. On the Internet, we find thousands of games, videos, films, books, . . . So, you don’t worry about being bored when you stay alone or wait for someone, especially on lockdown days.
The Internet is a great way to communicate. Thanks to the Internet, communication is
really
easy and available to
people
all over the world with a smartphone or a computer.
People
even can talk face to face with each other by using video calls.
Besides
, we have the chance to
make
friends through social networks like Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter
, .
.
.
We
keep
up with our friends’ daily life through pictures or statuses that they update on their social network.
Especially
, in COVID-19, the Internet is more vital than ever. We need it to work from home, study online,
keep
in touch
because
of lockdown.

The Internet provides huge amount of information. We can search for anything we want to know within seconds. We can
get
news immediately by using E-journal
instead
of reading newspapers. Learning online is
also
easy
because
there are mountains of online books, libraries, classes
, .
.
.


Thanks to the Internet, we have
a lot of
things to relax. On the Internet, we find thousands of games, videos, films, books
, .
.
.
So
, you don’t worry about
being bored
when you stay alone or wait for someone,
especially
on lockdown days.
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IELTS essay The Internet is important

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
199 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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