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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. v.8

The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. v. 8
The internet is a massive repository of human skill and it continues to accumulate more every day. At the click of a button, one can access information on just about any topic, from the abstract to the mundane. Not only is the information immediately, but it is also free. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend. On the one hand, the internet offers in-depth information on any topic in a fraction of seconds. Firstly, it provides many websites which have accumulated vast understanding from many sources, making it easier for educational purposes. If this option is not available, then students will be forced to read/refer various books or speak to an expert to get answers to their questions. Secondly, the internet has made information gathering an enjoyable activity. For example, we can learn about geography or historical information about our home or favourite places with the help of multimedia applications. Overall, we can get abundant capacity through the internet. However, readily available information is not without its disadvantages. Some of the material/content we access on the internet may not be genuine. For instance, a few may carry propaganda or fake information and direct users to do harmful things. Studies have shown that many terror outfits misuse social media platforms to lure youngsters into becoming a part of them. This is indeed a dangerous aspect of the internet and users should be prepared to protect themselves from such threats. Internet is a medium to get instant wisdom and information. This essay discusses both the advantages and disadvantages of free and immediate information available on the internet. In a nutshell, while the benefits are enormous, the drawbacks should not be overlooked.
The internet is a massive repository of human
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skill
and it continues to accumulate more every day. At the click of a button, one can access
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information
on
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just
about any topic, from the abstract to the mundane. Not
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only
is the
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information
immediately,
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but
it is
also
free. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

On the one hand, the internet offers in-depth
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information
on any topic in a fraction of seconds.
Firstly
, it provides
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many
websites which have accumulated vast understanding from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
sources, making it easier for educational purposes. If this option is not available, then students will
be forced
to read/refer various books or speak to an expert to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
answers to their questions.
Secondly
, the internet has made
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information
gathering an enjoyable activity.
For example
, we can learn about geography or historical
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information
about our home or
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favourite
places with the
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help
of multimedia applications.
Overall
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
abundant capacity through the internet.

However
,
readily
available
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information
is not without its disadvantages.
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Some of the
material/content we access on the internet may not be genuine.
For instance
, a
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few may
carry propaganda or fake
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information
and direct users to do harmful things. Studies have shown that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
terror outfits misuse social media platforms to lure youngsters into becoming a part of them. This is
indeed
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
aspect of the internet and users should
be prepared
to protect themselves from such threats.

Internet is a medium to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
instant wisdom and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. This essay discusses both the advantages and disadvantages of free and immediate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
available on the internet. In a nutshell, while the benefits are enormous, the drawbacks should not
be overlooked
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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