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Write about the following topic. The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. A7N1
In today's world, the internet is one of the most indispensable tools that allows us to reach wide range of data. Although it might be harmful in some cases, I totally agree that internet gives us many opportunities to obtain information. Firstly, the internet has removed a number of invisible borders around the information. Everyone can have this simple tool in order to get any kind of information online. In comparison to the past, information is one klick or tip far away from the people. It can fit in computers, smartphones and tablets. In addition to the easy accessibility, the internet has an open platform where one can view plenty of information for different topics. That's why the internet is actually part of our daily life. For instance, an 8 years old school kid can do his homework thanks to the internet quickly or a researcher can change the notes with others from all over the world. Apart from academic benefits, it can be used for basic purposes such as health, lifestyle, culture as well as literature. Prior to the invention of the internet, humanity was limited in terms of owing the information. Despite having different types of tools like newspapers, books, it was not practial to achieve accurate information. When I regard my childhood, time to time I had to complete my homework by leafing through immense books in the library. Now I can click and collect what I am searching for just in minutes and I can take it with me wherever I go to. Furthermore, it really eases my daily life in many aspects. I usually search something while I am shopping. Besides that, I subscribe some vocational magazines that allow me to enhance my skills. To conclude, the internet is a gate for those who are in search of discovering new things in the world of information.
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's world, the internet is one of the most indispensable tools that
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allows
us to reach wide range of data. Although it might be harmful in
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some
cases, I
totally
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agree
that internet gives us
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many
opportunities to obtain information.

Firstly
, the internet has removed a number of invisible borders around the
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information
. Everyone can have this simple tool in order to
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get
any kind of
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information
online.
In comparison
to the past,
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information
is one
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klick
or tip far away from the
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people
. It can fit in computers, smartphones and tablets.
In addition
to the easy accessibility, the internet has an open platform where one can view
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plenty
of
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information
for
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different
topics. That's why the internet is actually part of our daily life.
For instance
, an 8 years
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old
school kid can do his homework thanks to the internet
quickly
or a researcher can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the notes with others from all over the world. Apart from academic benefits, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for basic purposes such as health, lifestyle, culture
as well
as literature.

Prior to the invention of the internet, humanity
was limited
in terms of owing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. Despite having
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
types of tools like newspapers, books, it was not
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practial
to achieve accurate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. When I regard my childhood, time to time I had to complete my homework by leafing through immense books in the library.
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Now
I can click and collect what I am searching for
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just
in minutes and I can take it with me wherever I go to.
Furthermore
, it
really
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eases
my daily life in
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many
aspects. I
usually
search something while I am shopping.
Besides
that, I subscribe
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some
vocational magazines that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to enhance my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

To conclude
, the internet is a gate for those who are in search of discovering new things in the world of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
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IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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