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accuracy of the ''let it burn'' policy.

accuracy of the ''let it burn'' policy. LM1r
The text and the lecture offer two opposing views on the accuracy of the ''let it burn'' policy. While the text lists reasons to be suspicious of this policy, the professor counters those specific policy points. First, the professor said that scorched areas changed to wasteland are appropriate floors for growing new plants. However, the text asserts that fires had bad impacts on vegetation. Secondly, the lecture contends that new plants, which grow in scorched areas, are good foods for some animals like rabbits. In contrast, the author of the passage claimed that fire has an unfavorable impact on wildlife. For example, huge animals like deer and elk escape from the fire. Finally, the lecturer mentions that this fire disaster becomes a problem if it occurs once a year. But it wouldn't happen because these kinds of disasters need rare conditions like strong winds and low rainfall. On the other hand, the reading passage states that it has a ruining effect on the tourism industry. It causes visitors don't come to this area.
The text and the lecture offer two opposing views on the accuracy of the ''
let
it burn'' policy. While the text lists reasons to be suspicious of this policy, the professor counters those specific policy points.

First
, the professor said that scorched areas
changed
to wasteland are appropriate floors for growing new plants.
However
, the text asserts that fires had
bad
impacts on vegetation.

Secondly
, the lecture contends that new plants, which grow in scorched areas, are
good
foods for
some
animals like rabbits.
In contrast
, the author of the passage claimed that fire has an unfavorable impact on wildlife.
For example
, huge animals like deer and elk escape from the fire.

Finally
, the lecturer mentions that this fire disaster becomes a problem if it occurs once a year.
But
it wouldn't happen
because
these kinds of disasters need rare conditions like strong winds and low rainfall.
On the other hand
, the reading passage states that it has a ruining effect on the tourism industry. It causes visitors don't
come
to this area.
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IELTS essay accuracy of the ''let it burn'' policy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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