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The Internet contains a lot of information that can help people; however, sometimes the information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you Agree or Disagree? v.2

The Internet contains a lot of information that can help people; however, sometimes the information is inaccurate or wrong. v. 2
There is no shadow of doubt that Hypertext documents have wider information, though people can easily solve their problems. Many a person subscribes whether the information which is exhibited on Internet is accurate or not. Apparently, I agree with, abundance of knowledge aids the people at a great extent but sometimes fake information leads to a big threat for community. To initiate with plus points, the foremost is, World Wide Web is helped the people with a large quantity of information. This is also easiest amd fastest process which can be used by grey-hairs easily. Moreover, Internet helps to understand as well as solve queries by tapping one time on the search button. A student not only learn through Google or Youtube which has lot of information, but also give online testee which generates practical skills, increases mentality; For instance. Therefore, Net plays significant role in enhancing grip. However, sometimes people get wrong understanding by the use of Internet superhighway. There are many sites which give fake data, are run by group of people for their entertainment. This lead to change humans' thoughts from positive to passive for destroying them. According to electronic data protection community has reported that there are a lot of individuals have been caught for publishing fake static, as they were transferred to court and paying fines for being found guilty. To conclude, Internet has both pros and cons. A reader can' t blame that all the information is always incorrect but they ought to be aware that the information they need are being from trusted sites.
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agree
with, abundance of knowledge aids the
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people
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sometimes
fake
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information
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big
threat for community.

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helped
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people
with a large quantity of
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also
easiest
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process which can be
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helps
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learn through Google or
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Youtube
which has
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understanding by the
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of Internet superhighway. There are
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many
sites which give fake data,
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people
for their entertainment. This lead to
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positive
to passive for destroying them. According to electronic data protection community has reported that there are
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for publishing fake static, as they
were transferred
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, Internet has both pros and cons. A reader
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information
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but
they ought to be aware that the
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information
they need are being from trusted sites.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay The Internet contains a lot of information that can help people; however, sometimes the information is inaccurate or wrong. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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