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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view. Give reasons for your answer and include ant relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

With the growing technology, and having access to the internet people are getting connected smoothly. But have you ever thought about how this thing can deprive our tangible connection and unknowingly forced us to remain isolated? In this essay, I will argue on despite having a convenient and faster connection through the internet, doesn’t mean this connection is changing into a meaningful one. Compared to the past, with the advancement of technology nowadays people are getting used to the internet and can connect wherever they want. There are various types of applications or platforms that the internet provides us to stay connected virtually. Precisely we are just one-clicked away from everything, there are certain applications through which we can connect to people such as Facebook, Skype, Twitter, Instagram, etc. With all this one can talk to another whenever and wherever they want until and unless they have an internet connection with them. Despite all this internet attenuated our face-to-face connection and forced us to live in a virtual world. People are getting isolated and not be able to socialize physically with each other as they are in decadence by social media. The younger ones are getting more fervid towards it, all are busy scrolling down their news feed and busy making an invalid connection which restricts them from going out and connected to real people. They remain in their nutshell regarding the fact unknown they have the brevity of life to connect to the real people. I had an experience regarding this, as there was a time when I was busy scrolling down my newsfeed all day long almost about 14 hrs a day. I used to make lots of friends virtually, and I loved to talk with them but having all this I realized that I have been left behind from all the real world. When I looked back at that time, there’s just a kid isolated from all the world and people around him. I spent most of my time on the internet rather than being busy talking to my real friends and exploring all nature. The Internet undoubtedly changed our way of communication, and this is a positive thing. Being able to easily get access to friends and family might come in handy in a way or another and it is a great advantage. However, it also isolates us from the real world, real people, and getting our real connections with them.
With the growing technology, and having access to the internet
people
are getting connected
smoothly
.
But
have you ever
thought
about how this thing can deprive our tangible
connection
and
unknowingly
forced us to remain isolated? In this essay, I will argue on despite having a convenient and faster
connection
through the internet, doesn’t mean this
connection
is changing into a meaningful one.

Compared to the past, with the advancement of technology nowadays
people
are getting
used
to the internet and can connect wherever they want. There are various types of applications or platforms that the internet provides us to stay connected
virtually
.
Precisely
we are
just
one-clicked away from everything, there are certain applications through which we can connect to
people
such as Facebook, Skype, Twitter, Instagram, etc. With all this one can talk to another whenever and wherever they want until and unless they have an internet
connection
with them.

Despite all this internet attenuated our face-to-face
connection
and forced us to
live
in a virtual
world
.
People
are getting isolated and not be able to socialize
physically
with each other as they are in decadence by social media. The younger ones are getting more fervid towards it, all are
busy
scrolling down their news feed and
busy
making an invalid
connection
which restricts them from going out and connected to
real
people
. They remain in their nutshell regarding the fact unknown they have the brevity of life to connect to the
real
people
.

I had an experience regarding this, as there was a time when I was
busy
scrolling down my newsfeed all day long almost about 14 hrs a day. I
used
to
make
lots of friends
virtually
, and I
loved
to talk with them
but
having all this I realized that I have been
left
behind from all the
real
world
. When I looked back at that time, there’s
just
a kid isolated from all the
world
and
people
around him. I spent most of my time on the internet
rather
than being
busy
talking to my
real
friends and exploring all nature.

The Internet
undoubtedly
changed
our way of communication, and this is a
positive
thing.

Being able to
easily
get
access to friends and family might
come
in handy in a way or
another and
it is a great advantage.
However
, it
also
isolates us from the
real
world
,
real
people
, and getting our
real
connections
with them.
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IELTS essay The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. with this view.

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