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The increasing number of global plastic waste has been a compelling issue to the public in recent years.

The increasing number of global plastic waste has been a compelling issue to the public in recent years. Although some believe that there is an invention that makes plastic to be more eco-friendly, it is proven that plastic still become major substances that contaminate landfills in every country. This essay will discuss the reason why people still utilize this material in many activities and provide solutions to settle this problem. The usage of plastic has helped the industrial sector to save more expenditure to wrap their product more efficiently than other materials. It is because plastic is highly flexible and it can be designed in many shapes. Numerous companies, particularly in Asia, use plastic as part of their material to produce their main product for instance bags, containers, equipment, and furniture. In addition, the mass production of plastic reduces their cost so that merchants can minimize their expenditure to gain more profit. Therefore, although some businessmen agree that plastic brings detrimental effects to the environment, they still highly depend on this material to boost their sales. A recent study mentioned there is a significant number of Indonesian enterprises that use plastic wrap as their part of main products and ignore the local government policy. Therefore using plastic in companies' products means having competitive advantages in the market. There are two solutions to be offered for the government to overcome the issue. One of them is implementing strict regulations for merchants to use the natural biodegradable wrap in their products and imposing penalties for those who break the rule. This will make the demand for plastic production reduce in considerable numbers. The other step is establishing plastic recycling plants to control the population of plastic waste and redistribute it to the market as new products. Thus, the number of plastic waste will gradually decrease as well as the improvement of the living environment.
The increasing
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of global
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waste has been a compelling issue to the public in recent years. Although
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some
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makes
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plastic
to be more eco-friendly, it
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that
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plastic
still
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people
still
utilize this
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material
in
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many
activities and provide solutions to settle this problem.

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has
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helped
the industrial sector to save more expenditure to wrap their
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product
more
efficiently
than other
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materials
. It is
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because
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plastic
is
highly
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flexible and
it can
be designed
in
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many
shapes. Numerous
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companies
,
particularly
in Asia,
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use
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plastic
as part of their
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material
to produce their main
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product
for instance
bags, containers, equipment, and furniture.
In addition
, the mass production of
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plastic
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reduces
their cost
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so
that merchants can minimize their expenditure to gain more profit.
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some
businessmen
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agree
that
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plastic
brings detrimental effects to the environment, they
still
highly
depend on this
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material
to boost their sales. A recent study mentioned there is a significant
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number
of Indonesian enterprises that
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use
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plastic
wrap as their part of main
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products
and
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ignore
the local
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government
policy.
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using
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plastic
in
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companies
'
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products
means having competitive advantages in the market.

There are two solutions to
be offered
for the
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government
to overcome the issue. One of them is implementing strict regulations for merchants to
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use
the natural biodegradable wrap in their
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products
and imposing penalties for those who break the
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rule
. This will
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make
the demand for
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plastic
production
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reduce
in considerable
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numbers
. The other step is establishing
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plastic
recycling plants to control the population of
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plastic
waste and redistribute it to the market as new
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products
.
Thus
, the
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number
of
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plastic
waste will
gradually
decrease
as well
as the improvement of the living environment.
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IELTS essay The increasing number of global plastic waste has been a compelling issue to the public in recent years.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
312 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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