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The increased use of technology has contributed to an alarming rise in cheating in universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The increased use of technology has contributed to an alarming rise in cheating in universities. with this statement? jbGeX
There is an opinion that the rise of using modern devices has facilitated the rate of cheating in education, especially in universities. I disapprove of this viewpoint for the following reasons. To commence with, technology is not the fundamental factor that causes people to cheat during their period studying at universities. In fact, cheating had been comprehended as an unconstructive academic phenomenon even before the debut of technology in the community. This is also the clearest proof for the estimation that dishonesty in the current academic environment in universities depends on people’s compassion. In addition, even without technology, the greed of those who want to score the best results above all others is still a noteworthy issue. This also means that technology is just another means of all many other methods for people to cheat in the university academic environment. Furthermore, technical advance is a double-edged sword toward cheaters who are abusing it. In other words, the technology to fight against cheating has always been coexisting with the technology that allows cheating. As a piece of evidence, besides a large number of anti-cheating websites like “Plagiarism Detector” or codes written into education-supporting applications like Microsoft Team, simple gadgets like cameras can easily spot cheating behaviors during tests. In conclusion, I fully support the view that the development of technology does not aid in modern-day academic dishonesty in universities as the increased fraudulence in academics is governed by a lot of other factors and it is completely independent of technology.
There is an opinion that the rise of using modern devices has facilitated the rate of cheating in education,
especially
in
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universities
. I disapprove of this viewpoint for the following reasons.

To commence with,
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technology
is not the fundamental factor that causes
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people
to cheat during their period studying at
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universities
. In fact, cheating had
been comprehended
as an unconstructive
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academic
phenomenon even
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before
the debut of
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technology
in the community. This is
also
the clearest proof for the estimation that dishonesty in the
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current
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academic
environment in
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universities
depends on
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people
’s compassion.
In addition
, even without
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technology
, the greed of those who want to score the best results
above all
others is
still
a noteworthy issue. This
also
means that
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technology
is
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just
another means of all
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other
methods for
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people
to cheat in the
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university
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academic
environment.

Furthermore
, technical advance is a double-edged sword toward cheaters who are abusing it. In
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other
words, the
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technology
to fight against cheating has always been coexisting with the
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technology
that
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allows
cheating. As a piece of evidence,
besides
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a large number of
anti-cheating websites like “Plagiarism Detector” or codes written into education-supporting applications like Microsoft Team, simple gadgets like cameras can
easily
spot cheating behaviors during
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tests
.

In conclusion
, I
fully
support the view that the development of
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technology
does not aid in modern-day
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academic
dishonesty in
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universities
as the increased fraudulence in
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academics
is governed
by
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a lot of
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other
factors and it is completely independent of
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technology
.
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IELTS essay The increased use of technology has contributed to an alarming rise in cheating in universities. with this statement?

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