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What to do when you can't sleep?

What to do when you can't sleep? XlMM8
The content of the discussion was about insomnia. Insomnia involves conditions in which people difficult to get sleep and may they tossing and turning in bed for long periods. Also, the podcast has provided a solution to this problem by citing an interview with an expert. The expert has talked about counter-intuitive as an effective solution, and he claimed that behind this statement, he has got decades of data. His method is getting out of bed when you are facing insomnia and as you know it is the opposite of what seems logical or obvious and we might expect. And also, in the following of his interviews, he brings up, when you are in the bed and you can get sleep, in fact, the ability of the bed to put you to sleep starts getting diluted. And as I said, he recommends for preventing chronic insomnia, one of the most effective approaches is getting out of the bed and breaking the connection.
The content of the discussion was about
insomnia
.
Insomnia
involves conditions in which
people
difficult to
get
sleep and may
they tossing
and turning in
bed
for long periods.

Also
, the podcast has provided a solution to this problem by citing an interview with an expert.

The expert has talked about counter-intuitive as an effective solution, and he claimed that behind this statement, he has
got
decades of data. His method is getting out of
bed
when you are facing
insomnia
and as you know it is the opposite of what seems logical or
obvious and
we might
expect
.

And
also
, in the following of his interviews, he brings up, when you are in the
bed
and you can
get
sleep, in fact, the ability of the
bed
to put you to sleep
starts
getting diluted. And as I said, he recommends for preventing chronic
insomnia
, one of the most effective approaches is getting out of the
bed
and breaking the connection.
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IELTS essay What to do when you can't sleep?

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