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the importance of wristwatch and uses.

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A watch is so important for time management, and we already know the value of time. But if I tell you that a watch is not only about time management, you will be going to agree with me soon After reading this blog. We do not consider watches only for a time. They give us a decent look and Appearance, here we are going to talk about it, especially for a wristwatch. In the last, I will give you some suggestions of classic and bold watches' company names. But first, do think about it, why wearing a wristwatch is so essential to complete our appearance. The answer is simple, wearing a wristwatch can give us the exact same appearance as we want and at the same time, it gives us beauty to our personality. I always do prefer a wristwatch, whenever I am on a road trip, especially when I am going to give an Interview, taking an official meeting, and also running for a train or a flight. The watch is a very A necessary accessory for our personality. It would appear so unprofessional when you need to know the time and you grab your cell phone for it. Using a cell phone during official meetings or during interviews, even if you are interviewing would show others that you are unprofessional. So avoid using your cell phone For seeing the time when you are in the middle of the principal terms. Use a wristwatch and Be a professional. 2. A watch defines your appearance. A watch also can tell your personality to others; A child always prefers to wear colorful watches, sometimes with stickers on them. An athlete prefers most of the time sports watch, which at least has a stopwatch and an alarm. A A businessman always prefers a classy and bold watch, which can shine when he/she shuts his/her jacket's buttons. A watch is not only for seeing the time these days, furthermore, it is also for shinning your personality. A watch's appearance can define your bank balance, Sometimes some people also can tell you your mental status. So I am telling you wearing a The watch will give you attention.
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essential to complete our appearance.

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us the exact same appearance as we want and at the same
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Interview, taking an official meeting, and
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A necessary accessory for our personality. It would appear
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unprofessional when you need to know the
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and you grab your cell phone for it. Using a cell phone during official meetings or during interviews, even if you are interviewing would
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show
others that you are unprofessional.
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For seeing the
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Be a professional.

2. A
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defines your appearance. A
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A businessman always
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a classy and bold
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, which can shine when he/she shuts his/her jacket's buttons. A
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IELTS essay the importance of wristwatch and uses.

Essay
  American English
15 paragraphs
364 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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