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more people are interested in the history of the house

more people are interested in the history of the house E70Rx
Each financially stable person owns his dwelling. Some of them buy the built-up one and others made it by themselves. In a number of regions of the world, people started haring an interest in their own dwelling. There might be some reasons for that. Firstly, they can be interested in the first landowner of the building, it can possibly tell about the purpose of the building construction. Secondly, the exact ground, where the house is built, can make someone investigates the origin of the building they live. There is always someone, who builds a house and then sells it to someone. If at first the family have built a dwelling for them to live there, and it motivates them to reside there for a long time. Therefore, the family who is investigating this can ask the latest holder of the residence about from whom they bought it. Then search the information about the very first owner. Each country has its own history that the locals appreciate. However, you never know what has happened at the location of the construction. It means that a historically well-known person could live there or a significant event could have happened in the place where the building was constructed. For example, I live in a building where memorable people had been living. This architecture still exists, but current proprietors are different families. Such kind of information could possibly be obtained by doing research on the Internet, as it is the easiest way to do it. Similarly, visiting the library is also a good option, but it is not a quick process. To sum up, more and more people show their interest in house’s history to recognize the initial landowner of the houses, or to appreciate what kind of historical events could have happened in their building territory.
Each
financially
stable person
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owns
his dwelling.
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Some
of them
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buy
the built-up one
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and others
made it by themselves. In a number of regions of the world,
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people
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started
haring an interest in their
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own
dwelling. There might be
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some
reasons for that.
Firstly
, they can
be interested
in the
first
landowner of the
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building
, it can
possibly
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tell
about the purpose of the
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building
construction.
Secondly
, the exact ground, where the
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house
is built
, can
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make
someone investigates the origin of the
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building
they
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live
. There is always someone, who builds a
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house
and then sells it to someone. If at
first
the family have built a dwelling for them to
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live
there, and it motivates them to reside there for a long time.
Therefore
, the family who is investigating this can ask the latest holder of the residence about from whom they
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bought
it. Then search the information about the
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very
first
owner.

Each country has its
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own
history that the locals appreciate.
However
, you never know what has happened at the location of the construction. It means that a
historically
well-known person could
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live
there or a significant
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event
could have happened in the place where the
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building
was constructed
.
For example
, I
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live
in a
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building
where memorable
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people
had been living. This architecture
still
exists,
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but
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current
proprietors are
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different
families. Such kind of information could
possibly
be obtained
by doing research on the Internet, as it is the easiest way to do it.
Similarly
, visiting the library is
also
a
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good
option,
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but
it is not a quick process.

To sum up, more and more
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people
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show
their interest in
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house’s
history to recognize the initial landowner of the
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houses
, or to appreciate what kind of historical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
could have happened in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
territory.
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IELTS essay more people are interested in the history of the house

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
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