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The importance of learning foreign langiages

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Nowadays speaking foreign languages gives a person an opportunity to find a prestigous and highly paid job easily. That is why more and more people learn foreign languages especially English. In this essay I will discuss the most important sides of learning foreign languages and try to give true-to-life examples. Firstly, many employers look for a job seekers who speaks foreign langusges in order to maintain his or her company with a high qualified soecialist. Also being knowledgable in the field of foreign languages will make a man be confident and demanding. Secondly, mastering foreign languages gives a person earn more who do not have foreign language skill. For instance, in joint ventures they pay high salaries than in local ones. Moreover, one can communicate and make friends with foreigners that makes his or her life more wonderful. To conclude, I am sure that every perdon or a worker should speak at least one foreign language in order to be a highly qualified employee.
Nowadays speaking
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English. In this essay I will discuss the most
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important
sides of learning
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and try to give true-to-life examples.
Firstly
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employers look for a job seekers who
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speaks
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langusges
in order to maintain
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company
with a high qualified
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soecialist
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Also
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knowledgable
in the field of
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will
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be confident and demanding.
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, mastering
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gives a person earn more who do not have
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language
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skill
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For instance
, in joint ventures they pay high salaries than in local ones.
Moreover
, one can communicate and
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make
friends with foreigners that
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his or her
life more wonderful.
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, I am sure that every
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in order to be a
highly
qualified employee.

IELTS essay The importance of learning foreign langiages

Essay
  American English
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164 words
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