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Many people believe that university education should be free. However, in 2011students in England and Wales had to pay £9000 per year to attend university. Should this tuition fee be removed? Should university education be free in Uzbekistan? Remember to give your own opinion and some examples to support your opinion.

Many people believe that university education should be free. However, in 2011students in England and Wales had to pay £9000 per year to attend university. Should this tuition fee be removed? Should university education be free in Uzbekistan? Remember to give your own opinion and some examples to support your opinion. RklYV
It goes without noticing that obtaining bachelor degree is a privilege for a tremendous number of entrants that can be either free of charge or payable. Actually, while the supporters of the absence of scholarship’s expenditure provide the range of benefits, the opponents claim that the value of being educated can be lost. The position connected with the second side is agreed and the reasons will be demonstrated further. Initially, while describing the causes of the against side of tuition fee disappearing one cannot help mentioning some of them to be exact, educationalists’ absenteeism because of dropping wage and poor standard facilities. Moreover, one should pay attention to the fact that educators’ missing work is closely related with salary, as a part of students’ contract payment usually devoted to teachers that will lead to uninspired conduction of the classes. For instance, the last outcomes of the research made by University of Oklahoma questioned around a thousand of teachers from 50 higher educational establishments showed that professors are ready to strike if there will not be spread appropriate pay. Continuously, it has to be clarified that in order to not lose high-qualified academics the deserved rewarding should be presented. There is no doubt that Universities are not able to provide congruous facilities for student without remittances. Furthermore, it has to be emphasized that specialized faculties devoted to sport, stage direction, acting skills and ubiquitous scientific fields will not be enhanced due to the whole in inner budget. As an example, one can highlight that the above- described areas are always in need of investment due to the special equipment, artificial conditions or requisite for realizing outstanding outcomes in a particular area. Summarizing, evolution of the state as a collective factor of basic directions will not able to be achieved, if there is no contribution from the students’ account to the academy. From my own perspective, as the crucial part of Uzbekistan’s economy is occupied by educational institutions, the country will not benefit from removing student’s disbursement. Anyway, annually opportunities for receiving scholarships are enlarged for intelligent entrants allowing to be admitted on basis of obtained knowledge. Consequently, number of citizens desiring to be enlightened is being increasing despite of the contract and the Republic is being prospered. Overall, the prestige and status of being graduated in the community is equaled literacy gained for money that provokes youth to esteem education. To crown it all, even though the interrelation between cognizance and finances in touch with universities has been argued for many years, the contemporary tendency to measure everything in money forces human beings to treasure the acceptance of lore. As a result, these men will do the best to enrich both own possession and homeland ones that can further go to beneficial circulation simultaneously.
It goes without noticing that obtaining bachelor degree is a privilege for a tremendous number of entrants that can be either free of charge or payable. Actually, while the supporters of the absence of scholarship’s expenditure provide the range of benefits, the opponents claim that the value of
being educated
can
be lost
. The position connected with the second side is
agreed
and the reasons will
be demonstrated
further
.

Initially
, while describing the causes of the against side of tuition fee disappearing one cannot
help
mentioning
some
of them to be exact, educationalists’ absenteeism
because
of dropping wage and poor standard facilities.
Moreover
, one should pay attention to the fact that educators’ missing work is
closely
related with salary, as a part of
students’
contract payment
usually
devoted to teachers that will lead to uninspired conduction of the classes.
For instance
, the last outcomes of the research made by University of Oklahoma questioned around a thousand of teachers from 50 higher educational establishments
showed
that professors are ready to strike if there will not
be spread
appropriate pay.
Continuously
, it
has to
be clarified
that in order to not lose high-qualified academics the deserved rewarding should
be presented
.

There is no doubt that Universities are not able to provide congruous facilities for
student
without remittances.
Furthermore
, it
has to
be emphasized
that specialized faculties devoted to sport, stage direction, acting
skills
and ubiquitous scientific fields will not
be enhanced
due to the whole in inner budget. As an example, one can highlight that the above-
described
areas are always in need of investment due to the special equipment, artificial conditions or requisite for realizing outstanding outcomes in a particular area. Summarizing, evolution of the state as a collective factor of basic directions will not able to
be achieved
, if there is no contribution from the
students’
account to the academy.

From my
own
perspective, as the crucial part of Uzbekistan’s economy
is occupied
by educational institutions, the country will not benefit from removing
student’s
disbursement. Anyway,
annually
opportunities for receiving scholarships
are enlarged
for intelligent entrants allowing to
be admitted
on basis of obtained knowledge.
Consequently
, number of citizens desiring to
be enlightened
is being increasing
despite of
the contract and the Republic is
being prospered
.
Overall
, the prestige and status of
being graduated
in the community
is equaled
literacy gained for money that provokes youth to esteem education.

To crown it all,
even though
the interrelation between cognizance and finances in touch with universities has
been argued
for
many
years, the contemporary tendency to measure everything in money forces human beings to treasure the acceptance of lore.
As a result
, these
men
will do the best to enrich both
own
possession and homeland ones that can
further
go to beneficial circulation
simultaneously
.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that university education should be free. However, in 2011students in England and Wales had to pay £9000 per year to attend university. Should this tuition fee be removed? Should university education be free in Uzbekistan? Remember to give your own opinion and some examples to support your opinion.

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