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The importance of friendship

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Friendship has been considered of great importance in every people’s life for the following reasons. First of all, it can help individuals to improve their spiritual life. Friends are the persons that they can share any feelings from happiness to sorrow, even the darkest secrets which they can not share with their family members like parents or siblings. Secondly, friends are people’s comfort zone. Humans can be themselves when they are with friends even though they are wearing pajamas, wearing no makeup, they just do no care. Buddies love the way they are. Last but not least, friends push up persons. Many times in life, people are afraid and the fear stops them from achieving the goals that they deserve to have. But friends will be here to support them overcome their fears and push persons out of their comfort zone. In conclusion, friends make life more meaningful, therefore plays an indispensable part in life.
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are the persons that they can share any feelings from happiness to sorrow, even the darkest secrets which they can not share with their family members like parents or siblings.
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push up persons.
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will be here to support them overcome their fears and push persons out of their comfort zone.
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IELTS essay The importance of friendship

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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