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The importance of Environment

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The environment gives us countless benefits that we can’t repay our entire life. As they are connected with the forest, trees, animals, water, and air. The forest and trees filter the air and absorb harmful gases. Plants purify water, reduce the chances of flood maintain natural balance and many others. Moreover, the environment keeps a close check on the environment and its functioning, It regulates the vital systems that are essential for the ecosystem. Besides, it maintains the culture and quality of life on earth. The environment regulates various natural cycles that happen daily. These cycles help in maintaining the natural balance between living things and the environment. Disturbance of these things can ultimately affect the life cycle of humans and other living beings. The environment has helped us and other living beings to flourish and grow from thousands of years. The environment provides us fertile land, water, air, livestock and many essential things for survival.
The
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environment
gives us countless benefits that we can’t repay our entire life. As they
are connected
with the forest, trees, animals, water, and air. The forest and trees filter the air and absorb harmful gases. Plants purify water,
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reduce
the chances of flood maintain natural balance and
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many
others.

Moreover
, the
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environment
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keeps
a close
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check
on the
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and its functioning, It regulates the vital systems that are essential for the ecosystem.
Besides
, it maintains the culture and quality of life on earth.

The
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environment
regulates various natural cycles that happen daily. These cycles
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help
in maintaining the natural balance between living things and the
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environment
. Disturbance of these things can
ultimately
affect the life cycle of humans and other living beings.

The
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environment
has
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helped
us and other living beings to flourish and grow from thousands of years. The
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environment
provides us fertile land, water, air, livestock and
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many
essential things for survival.
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IELTS essay The importance of Environment

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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