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the impact of balance for students

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Students don’t arrange a suitable schedule. When you spend too much time working part-time, you will always be busy and feel exhausted. This makes them not focus on the lecture in class, even doze and lose sleep. It has a huge impact on your academic performance. Students spend less time doing homework, going to class, and reading. Over time, your score will suffer, namely lower scores and retakes, re-study. Even many students have left school to work part-time. On the day of the test, you are not eligible to take the test, you must study again. We need to remember that the most important task is learning. Most of HUBT's students, when working part-time, mostly reflect that the work they are doing affects their health. Studying in university and taking part-time jobs take us the most time of day, we will always be busy and feel exhausted because each day we have a defined amount of energy. In particular, with jobs that require working late or getting up early, it is even more affected. Especially when many of you come home from work and have a habit of bathing or washing your hair, this is completely dangerous. Another reason is that studying while working makes you not have time to spend with family, friends, and yourself.
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part-time, you will always be busy and feel exhausted. This
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them not focus on the lecture in
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, even doze and lose sleep. It has a huge impact on your academic performance.
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spend less
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time
doing homework, going to
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, and reading. Over
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, your score will suffer,
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lower scores and retakes, re-study. Even
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school to work part-time. On the day of the
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, you are not eligible to take the
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, you
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study again. We need to remember that the most
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of day, we will always be busy and feel exhausted
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each day we have a defined amount of energy.
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IELTS essay the impact of balance for students

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