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Describe your neighborhood.

Describe your neighborhood. Ywk3V
I live in a small town of An Giang, It is a nice town. My neighborhood is safe and quiet place because it is populated by good neighbors. In my community, you can find all kind of places, for example, you can go to the swimming pool which is located near the park. In my neighborhood, there is a park across from my school, there are 2 or 3 bookstore. Have a bakery between mall and flowerstore. There are restaurant near the supermarket. There is a clothing store next to the library. There are no airports or train stations in my town. People in my neighborhood is friendly and helpful, their can help you everytime if you need, so we have developed long-lasting friendships and get on really well together, although some of them sometimes hold noisy parties until late at night and play loud music. My neighbourhood is a nice place which has pretty much everything from nice and wide streets to clean ponds and lakes. However, it would be grow some trees to makes the air is fresh, and will nice to have new things, like a large swimming pool and a large playground for the children, to make my neighbourhood even a better place for living.
I
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live
in a
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small
town of An
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Giang
, It is a nice town. My neighborhood is safe and quiet
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place
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because
it
is populated
by
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good
neighbors. In my community, you can find all kind of
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places
,
for example
, you can go to the swimming pool which
is located
near the park. In my neighborhood, there is a park across from my school, there are 2 or 3
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bookstore
. Have a bakery between mall and
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flowerstore
. There are
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restaurant
near the supermarket. There is a clothing store
next
to the library.
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There
are no airports or train stations in my town.
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People
in my neighborhood is friendly and helpful, their can
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help
you
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everytime
if you need,
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so
we have developed long-lasting friendships and
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get
on
really
well together, although
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some
of them
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sometimes
hold noisy parties until late at night and play loud music. My
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neighbourhood
is a nice
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place
which has pretty much everything from nice and wide streets to clean ponds and lakes.
However
, it would be
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grow
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some
trees to
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makes
the air is fresh, and will nice to have new things, like a large swimming pool and a large playground for the children, to
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make
my
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neighbourhood
even a better
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place
for living.
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IELTS essay Describe your neighborhood.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
209 words
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