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The image illustrates the step-by-step procedure of making instant noodles in a factory.

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The image illustrates the step-by-step procedure of making instant noodles in a factory. The procedure of manufacturing instant noodles has been divided into eight steps. The manufacturing process starts with storing flour in the silos and ends with labelling and sealing the instant noodles' cups. Flour, water, oil, cooking oil, vegetables, and spices have been used to make these instant noodles. The process begins with a truck storing the flour into storage silos. The flour is then mixed with water and oil to prepare a dough. The dough is passed onto the roller to form dough sheets. The dough sheets pass through a connected machine where they are finely cut into long strips. It is significant to observe how the dough strips are transformed into noodles discs. The noodles discs are fried in cooking oil and then left to dry. Noodle discs, vegetables, and spices get added into the cups. The final step is where these cups are labelled with the brand name and ingredients' list and sealed properly.
The image illustrates the step-by-step procedure of making instant
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noodles
in a factory. The procedure of manufacturing instant
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noodles
has
been divided
into eight steps.

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The
manufacturing process
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starts
with storing
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flour
in the silos and ends with labelling and sealing the

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instant
noodles' cups.
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Flour
, water,
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oil
, cooking
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oil
, vegetables, and spices have been
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used
to
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make
these instant noodles.

The process
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begins
with a truck storing the
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flour
into storage silos. The
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flour
is then mixed with water and
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oil
to prepare a
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dough
.
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The
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dough
is passed
onto the roller to form
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dough
sheets.
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The
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dough
sheets pass through a connected machine where they are
finely
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cut
into long strips. It is significant to observe how the
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dough
strips
are transformed
into
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noodles
discs.

The
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noodles
discs
are fried
in cooking
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oil
and then
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left
to dry.
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Noodle
discs, vegetables, and spices
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get
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added
into the cups. The final step is where these cups
are labelled
with the brand name and ingredients' list and sealed
properly
.
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IELTS essay The image illustrates the step-by-step procedure of making instant noodles in a factory.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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