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The image illustrates the contamination of water.The picture focuses on yhe process where the emission of harmful gases reacts with water and harm the flora and fauna there.The factories are

The image illustrates the contamination of water. The picture focuses on yhe process where the emission of harmful gases reacts with water and harm the flora and fauna there. The factories are rkn3N
The image illustrates the contamination of water. The picture focuses on yhe process where the emission of harmful gases reacts with water and harm the flora and fauna there. The factories are one of the main reason for the increased chemical reactions in water. The fossil fuel that is moved out of plant is carbondioxide. Carbondioxide reacts with weak acids in water, which is posionous for coral and planktons that live deep inside the water. This toxic gas is harmful and dangerous for the fishes, plants and other creatures that live in water. Over the years it is observed that there is gradual increase in the acidity level of water. It is interpreted that if this negligence is continued, this will result in increased acidity or high level of acidity in water till the year two thousand one hundred.
The image illustrates the contamination of
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water
. The picture focuses on
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yhe
process where the emission of harmful gases reacts with
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water
and harm the flora and fauna there.
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The
factories are one of the main reason for the increased chemical reactions in water.

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The
fossil fuel
that is
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moved
out of plant is
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carbondioxide
.
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Carbondioxide
reacts with weak acids in
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water
, which is
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posionous
for coral and
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planktons
that
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live
deep inside the water.

This toxic gas is harmful and
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dangerous
for the fishes, plants and other creatures that
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live
in water.

Over the years it
is observed
that there is gradual increase in the acidity level of
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water
. It
is interpreted
that if this negligence
is continued
, this will result in increased acidity or high level of acidity in
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water
till the year two thousand one hundred.
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IELTS essay The image illustrates the contamination of water. The picture focuses on yhe process where the emission of harmful gases reacts with water and harm the flora and fauna there. The factories are

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