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Individuals should be allowed to carry guns. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals should be allowed to carry guns. bONXl
The debate surrounding the permission to keep guns among citizens is one of the most charged in social security. While there is an army of people convinced that individuals should be entitled to own firearms, I unequivocally disagree with this idea. Granted, one might claim that gun possession should be allowed. This can be predicated on the assumption that criminals have a tendency to besiege victims with melee weapons such as daggers or baseball bats. As a result, carrying guns is able to minimize the risk of being injured on the grounds that firearms enable victims to keep a distance from criminals. If they only use pepper spray, criminals still stand a chance of restricting their movements and preventing them from using it. According to this theory, guns are the most efficacious defensive weapon. However, this line of reasoning is irrational, since guns are possibly ineffectual in several circumstances. To begin with, in order to create conducive conditions to their plans, crafty offenders probably render victims unconscious by taser gun or anesthetic. In addition, even victims are alert enough to use guns, there is no assurance that guns can protect them from offenders. This can be elucidated by a high level of expertise for aiming and keeping balance when using guns. As a result, they may miss the target, and this can put them in jeopardy if criminals seize their guns. To add further credence to my assertion, I believe that it is infeasible to legalize gun ownership. This can be attributed to certain groups of people whose perception is not clear. Take adolescents, for instance, they may misuse guns due to their undeveloped cognition. The most persuasive evidence could be seen in the research from Gun Violent Archive, which demonstrates that gun violence has killed 1165 American people in 2021. The culprits behind this severe issue are children having delusions that they are hunters. Therefore, the world we are living in may be beset with dangers and terrors if all individuals are allowed to carry guns. Of course, this is not to say that guns should be banned. Nevertheless, we have to bear in mind that only police and guard should be authorized to use guns for the sake of protecting people. Owing to guns, they can deter criminals from escaping and force them to surrender. In conclusion, although there is a group of people advocating legitimating gun ownership of individuals, I firmly disapprove of this opinion.
The debate surrounding the permission to
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keep
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among citizens is one of the most charged in social security. While there is an army of
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people
convinced that individuals should
be entitled
to
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own
firearms, I
unequivocally
disagree with this
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idea
.

Granted, one might claim that
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gun
possession should be
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allowed
. This can
be predicated
on the assumption that
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criminals
have a tendency to besiege
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victims
with melee weapons such as daggers or baseball bats.
As a result
, carrying
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guns
is able to minimize the
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risk
of
being injured
on the grounds that firearms enable
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victims
to
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keep
a distance from
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criminals
. If they
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only
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use
pepper spray,
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criminals
still
stand a chance of restricting their movements and preventing them from using it.

According to this theory,
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guns
are the most efficacious defensive weapon.
However
, this line of reasoning is irrational, since
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guns
are
possibly
ineffectual in several circumstances. To
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begin
with, in order to create conducive conditions to their plans, crafty offenders
probably
render
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victims
unconscious by taser
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gun
or anesthetic.
In addition
, even
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victims
are alert
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enough
to
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use
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guns
, there is no assurance that
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guns
can protect them from offenders. This can
be elucidated
by a high level of expertise for aiming and keeping balance when using
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guns
.
As a result
, they may miss the target, and this can put them in jeopardy if
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criminals
seize their guns.

To
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add
further
credence to my assertion, I believe that it is infeasible to legalize
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gun
ownership. This can
be attributed
to certain groups of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
whose perception is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
. Take adolescents,
for instance
, they may misuse
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guns
due to their undeveloped cognition. The most persuasive evidence could be
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seen
in the research from
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Gun
Violent Archive, which demonstrates that
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gun
violence has killed 1165 American
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people
in 2021. The culprits behind this severe issue are children having delusions that they are hunters.
Therefore
, the world we are living in may be beset with
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dangers
and terrors if all individuals are
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allowed
to carry
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guns
.
Of course
, this is not to say that
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guns
should
be banned
.
Nevertheless
, we
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have to
bear in mind that
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only
police and guard should
be authorized
to
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use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guns
for the sake of protecting
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people
. Owing to
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guns
, they can deter
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criminals
from escaping and force them to surrender.

In conclusion
, although there is a group of
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people
 advocating legitimating
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gun
ownership of individuals, I
firmly
disapprove of this opinion.
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IELTS essay Individuals should be allowed to carry guns.

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