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The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. lj81o

The figure depicts two stages in the advancement of technology of cell phones. overall, we can see the very usual old model having very less features on the contrary we can see the new model with advanced specifications. The old model is basically 130mm in length and 50mm in breadth. It has black and white display however keyboard has 15 keys with one function selecting key in the center. The new model is comparatively lighter having almost half the weight and key pad is longer and slimmer with lots of digits for various functionalities. it has full color display with many additional features like camera with video recording, internet, music player, multi player games etc however both have earphone on top for clear audio. All in all, i would say contemporary mobile phones are much thinner and light besides having other facilities it somehow outraced early phones which are not much attractive and doesn't provide other necessities. Besides this camera and video facilities are unavailable which cant be inevitable.

The figure depicts two stages in the advancement of technology of cell phones.

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overall
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 usual This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withminiatureexemplary
model
 having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun features is countable.fewer
less
 features on the contrary
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withminiatureexemplary
model
 with advanced specifications.

The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withminiatureexemplary
model
 is basically
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "130 mm"130 mm
130mm
 in length and Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "50 mm"50 mm
50mm
 in breadth. It has black and white display however
 keyboard has 15 keys with one function selecting key in the center.

The new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withminiatureexemplary
model
 is comparatively
 lighter having almost half the weight and key pad is longer and slimmer with lots of digits for various functionalities. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 has full color display with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 additional features like camera with video recording, internet, music player, multi player games etc however
 both have earphone on top for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 audio.

All in all, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would say contemporary mobile phones are much thinner and light besides
 having other facilities it somehow outraced early phones which are not much attractive and doesn't provide other necessities. Besides
 this camera and video facilities are unavailable which Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
 be inevitable. 