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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 0AWmQ

In modern era people in the society are effortless to maintain the environment and the government bodies and huge organizations are giving their efforts to do so. These days most of the people give contribution to the environmental activities such as grow plantation on the globe. I completely disagree with statement that only higher authorities and huge companies play a vital role for environment and local people don’t participate to improve environment. Although government authorities are preform actions to regulate to environment for their betterment, some of the volunteers are organize campaigns for vegetation on planet. For instance, in UK Ramanpreet singh runs a Green Aid which works in the cities for grow new trees. Moreover a local person of London takes part in campaigns and aim to plant 5 trees per person. As results, individuals can take part to improve the environment. In addition, regulate the environment pollution by transportation. Nowadays people use public transport instead of private vehicles. Therefore less pollution is produced by smoke of vehicles. Due to which it helps to cool the climate of globe. Owing to which, it tends to decrease the global warming in the world. Hence, the society plays an ample role to control the environment for its betterment. In conclusion, population of the globe contributes their hands to improve the environment. In spite of the fact that higher authorities and bigger companies development articles are shown on papers only. It proves that people of the nation can run their aids without help of government bodies. Moreover it can make major initiatives the environment to change by mankind.

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only
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environment
 and local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
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 don’t participate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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government
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environment
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 a local person of London This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participates
takes part
 in campaigns and aim to plant 5 trees per person. As results, individuals can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the environment.

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, regulate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 pollution by transportation. Nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public transport instead
 of private vehicles. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 less pollution is produced
 by smoke of vehicles. Due to which it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to cool the climate of globe. Owing to which, it tends to decrease the global warming in the world. Hence
, the society plays an ample role to control the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 for its betterment.

In conclusion
, population of the globe contributes their hands to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 the fact that higher authorities and bigger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 development articles are shown
 on papers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. It proves that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 of the nation can run their aids without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 bodies. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 major initiatives the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 by mankind. 