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The illustration depicts how to erect an igloo.

The illustration depicts how to erect an igloo. DqDOE

The illustration depicts how to erect an igloo. Overall, this process encompasses three main stages, which commences with sawing snow, followed by shaping the igloo, and ends with refining and completing it. Initially, dug snow is cut by a saw into rectangular large blocks. It is important to choose hard-packed snow because of its thickness and toughness. Being smoothed the edges, these blocks are placed to form a dorm-shaped igloo. Subsequently, the largest one of which IS SEAL at the top so as to prevent exposure TO cold wind. After this stage is complete, a hole is dug beneath the wall so that an entrance is created before using loose snow to cement all crevices. Having smoothed the inside of the igloo by hand, people cover the hole with snow blocks. Eventually, an air hole is drilled into the roof to ensure ventilation. Once this final stage has been completed, the igloo is ready for use.

The illustration depicts how to erect an igloo.

Overall
, this process encompasses three main stages, which commences with sawing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
, followed by shaping the igloo, and ends with refining and completing it.

Initially
, dug You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 into rectangular large blocks. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to choose This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-packed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its thickness and toughness. Being smoothed
 the edges, these blocks are placed
 to form a dorm-shaped igloo. Subsequently
, the largest one of which IS SEAL at the top 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 exposure TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 wind.

After this stage is complete, a hole is dug
 beneath the wall This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that an entrance is created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 using loose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 to cement all crevices. Having smoothed the inside of the igloo by hand, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 cover the hole with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 blocks. Eventually
, an air hole is drilled
 into the roof to ensure ventilation. Once this final stage has been completed
, the igloo is ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 