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The illustration below show how coffee is sometimes produced

The illustration below show how coffee is sometimes produced 7rKrX

The information describes the production of coffee making use of the dry method. Overall, the dry method of manufacturing coffee involves a step-by-step process. It is also clear that there are some tools and equipments necessary in order for the product to be produced. In detail, firstly, the beans are hand sorted, placed and cleaned through sieve and then dried in the sun for a month. It then needs to be ranked and turned before storing them in a silo. The next stage is transferring the beans to mill with the use of the truck where it undergo a further three stages. The sequence is as follows: hulling; grading: and bagging. The product can now be sold. Furthermore the output can be roasted, packed, and made available in the market as a roasted bean

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 of the dry method.

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clear
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 tools and equipments necessary in order for the product to be produced
.

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, the beans are hand sorted, placed and cleaned through sieve and then dried in the sun for a month. It then needs to be ranked
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before
 storing them in a silo.

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use
 of the truck where it Did you mean "undergoes"?undergoes
undergo
 a further
 three stages. The sequence is as follows: hulling; grading: and bagging. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 product can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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be sold
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 the output can be roasted
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