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Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals. You should say: why you went there? what the place looeseked like? what you did there and say which animals you found particularly interesting.

Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals. You should say: why you went there? what the place looeseked like? what you did there and say which animals you found particularly interesting. eR1KK
I like zoo for I saw different wild animals. I go to the zoo in Navoi region on Sundays. I go to the this place for observe of wild animals and study behaviour of animals. Influence in this area there are a lot from this wild animals. For that reason, I visit to the zoo. This place isn't very big. That is a little bit smaller. But in my view looked like picturesque. the site is surrounded by lush green trees and a large stream flowed near the zoo. Which makes the scenery even more beautiful. In the zoo I take a photo of animals in this place and I take a lot of informations and dates to own about animals. In the area, I was most interested animal was the lion, because the lion is stronger and terrible than other animals and it is the king of the forest. All in all, animals are our friend and we must also take care of them that is blessings of nature
I like zoo for I
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saw
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different
wild
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animals
. I go to the zoo in
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Navoi
region on Sundays.
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I
go to
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the this
place for observe of wild
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animals
and study
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behaviour
of
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animals
. Influence in this area there are a lot from this wild
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animals
. For that reason, I visit to the zoo. This place isn't
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very
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big
.
That is
a
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little bit
smaller.
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But
in my view looked like picturesque.
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the
site
is surrounded
by lush green trees and a large stream flowed near the zoo.
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Which
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makes
the scenery even more
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beautiful
. In the zoo I take a photo of
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animals
in this place and I take
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a lot of
The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?
informations
and dates to
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own
about
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animals
. In the area, I was most interested
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animal
was the lion,
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because
the lion is stronger and terrible than other
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animals
and it is the king of the forest. All in all,
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animals
are our
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friend and
we
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must
also
take care of them
that is
blessings of
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
nature
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IELTS essay Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals. You should say: why you went there? what the place looeseked like? what you did there and say which animals you found particularly interesting.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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