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It is believed that having a single career becomes an old one. The new fashion will have many careers or ways of earning money and further education is something that will continue throughout life. Today, I will talk about why people should have many careers and continue their education to the end. Today, many industries are developing rapidly, people all want to have more sources of income. society's supply is barely enough for them, and most of them have an extra job for themselves. Doctors, lecturers, . . . they all spend their weekends doing another job.

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