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It is believed that having a single career becomes an old one. The new fashion will have many careers or ways of earning money and further education is something that will continue throughout life. Today, I will talk about why people should have many careers and continue their education to the end. Today, many industries are developing rapidly, people all want to have more sources of income. society's supply is barely enough for them, and most of them have an extra job for themselves. Doctors, lecturers, . . . they all spend their weekends doing another job.
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careers and continue their education to the
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for them, and most of them have an extra job for themselves. Doctors, lecturers
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IELTS essay the idea of having a single

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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