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why the real friend is good for everyone?

why the real friend is good for everyone? VYLK3

The real friend is good for everyone because it will help people become better. A superb friend will assist you when you have a problem with family, social, study, emotion, . . If you are unhappy, your friend will come and encourage you. If you are glad, so do they. Furthermore, it will help people connect with each other and will develop your soft skill. So that you will not timid to ask or talk to the others. Or when you have a project or a presentation, you will more confident and you will do it more splendid. In conclusion, the real friend will help them become better together

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