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the house/flat where you live now

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There are many things I enjoy and would want to have. However, I like a little dog. I used to enjoy it as a kid. If it's feasible, I'd want my parents to get me a present for my birthday. When I was younger, I saw that a friend of mine had a very lovely small puppy. I've always desired to have a dog like that to play with every day since that day. It's a white dog with silky smooth fur that's quite comfortable to the touch. Anyone who looks at it wants to take it in their arms. I can play with it and take it for a walk around the home in my leisure time. It will make me joyful and take my mind off my problems. And it will become one of my closest friends. I'm hoping my parents will hand it over to me.
There are
many
things I enjoy and would want to have.
However
, I like a
little
dog. I
used
to enjoy it as a kid. If it's feasible, I'd want my parents to
get
me a present for my birthday. When I was younger, I
saw
that a friend of mine had a
very
lovely
small
puppy. I've always desired to have a dog like that to play with every day since that day. It's a white dog with silky smooth fur that's quite comfortable to the touch. Anyone who looks at it wants to take it in their arms. I can play with it and take it for a walk around the home in my leisure time. It will
make
me joyful and take my mind off my problems. And it will become one of my closest friends. I'm hoping my parents will hand it over to me.
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IELTS essay the house/flat where you live now

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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