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about a gift you have received from your parents.

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My parents have given me many gifts, but my favorite gift is a laptop. I was given that gift by my parents when I was 16 years old. It's a Dell vostro i5 3000 laptop. This laptop is available in black color. I don't know the price of the laptop as it was a gift but it has been priceless for me. This gift has been very beneficial for me. It has helped me both educationally and socially. I use my laptop whenever I have to do an assignment or report. I also talk or communicate with my friends by using different websites and applications. It was an indispensable part of helping me get into Hanoi University of Science and Technology and it still sticks with me to this day. In short, this laptop is extremely important to me.

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