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The history is not useful. Do you agree or disagree?

The history is not useful. Do you agree or disagree? wBe1r

Society is created by their history. To understand that the culture of the community should have been observed by their own pasts who have carried traditional developments from past up to now. Firstly, important events have occurred ideas about the lives of people. Also, These events combination are significant to recognize the condition of the present time. In other words, accumulation of all knowledge can be called our past and the ideas can be utilized which depend on historical events. Consequently, we can easily say that we are ourselves history. After a while, our lives types, decisions, culture, standards and so on will be left as a legacy to the young generation. What is the biggest source in the world? I think its history which has all answers depend on the experiment. This source consists of your ancestors’ knowledge and their adventures which determined where you live in which condition. Nowadays, there are many searches regarding it and we still ongoing to learn how we have been coming into today. The searches are like a light on our past. For example, we have learned how the Egyptians built the pyramids. The answer is Egyptians used many slaves to carried one block which made far from pyramids and these blocks carried by one by. So, completion of the pyramids was taking many years. In my opinion, historical science assists either lesson learned to depend on people decisions or scientific knowledge which are sum off positive sciences. History has been important for the whole of the world.

Society is created
 by their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
. To understand that the culture of the community should have been observed
 by their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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pasts
 who have carried traditional developments from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Firstly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 have occurred This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 about the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Also
, These Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "events'" or "event's"?events'event's
events
 combination are significant to recognize the condition of the present time. In other words
, accumulation of all knowledge can be called
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past
 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
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 which depend on historical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
.

Consequently
, we can easily
 say that we are ourselves You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
. After a while, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 types, decisions, culture, standards and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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left
 as a legacy to the young generation.

What is the biggest source in the world? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 which has all answers depend on the experiment. This source consists of your ancestors’ knowledge and their adventures which determined where you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in which condition. Nowadays, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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it and
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today
. The searches are like a light on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
. For example
, we have learned how the Egyptians built the pyramids. The answer is Egyptians This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 slaves to carried one block which made far from pyramids and these blocks carried by one by. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, completion of the pyramids was taking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years.

In my opinion, historical science assists either lesson learned to depend on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.decision
decisions
 or scientific knowledge which are sum off This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 sciences. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
History
 has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for the whole of the world. 