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The historical society and the other hand

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In these days as far as the technology is concerned, growth never gets void, however it must be remembered that these technological phenomena should never be possible without the constant effort of the research and development teams around the globe. Therefore, many industries are having a hard time to cope up with this tremendous uplifting of the machines, artificial intelligence, etc. Though out the process of the research and development it must be considered that there is risk factor as well as the future reward is associated. To conclude, the well known motive of this is the well-being of the society and finding a beneficial approach to deal with a concerned problem.
In these days as far as the technology
is concerned
, growth never
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gets
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however
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must
be remembered
that these technological phenomena should never be possible without the constant effort of the research and development teams around the globe.
Therefore
,
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many
industries are having a
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hard
time to cope up with this tremendous uplifting of the machines, artificial intelligence, etc. Though out the process of the research and development it
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must
be considered
that there is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
factor
as well
as the future reward
is associated
.
To conclude
, the well known motive of this is the well-being of the society and finding a beneficial approach to deal with a concerned problem.

IELTS essay The historical society and the other hand

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112 words
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