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Some people say that cyclists should be tested before they are allowed to ride on main road

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It is often argued that the people who ride cycles should be tested before they are permitted to ride on main roads. I completely agree that this is the best way to protect humans' life and right. On the other hand, I believe that the best way to save people's lives on the road is testing users of vehicles such as cars and bicycles. Everyone knows that cyclists are never tested while drivers have driving licence. Because of this, cyclists can be vulnerable road users. And they should have a number of basic safety tips and skills they should know before they start to cycle that will help them to be safer on the main roads. They should have licence like other drivers. Another point to consider is that, nowadays we can see many accidents which are caused by cyclists on the road. That's why the government solve this kind of problems in legal way. The cyclists have been given some suggestions for using bike bikes on the roads. They should obey road signs and traffic lights and never use headphones or mobile phone when they are riding. And then they should use arm signals when they are turning left or right. In addition to these, They should wear helmet correctly and light coloured clothing to improve safety. In conclusion, it may be a good idea if cyclists get riding licence for riding on main roads when their lives and rights on risks and in danger.
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who ride cycles should be
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before
they
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that this is the best way to protect humans' life and right.

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people
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is testing users of vehicles such as cars and bicycles. Everyone knows that cyclists are never
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tested
while drivers have driving
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licence
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, cyclists can be vulnerable
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users. And they should have a number of basic safety tips and
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skills
they should know
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before
they
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start
to cycle that will
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help
them to be safer on the main
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roads
. They should have
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licence
like other drivers.

Another point to consider is that, nowadays we can
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see
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accidents which
are caused
by cyclists on the
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. That's why the
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government
solve this kind of problems in legal way. The cyclists have been
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given
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some
suggestions for using bike bikes on the
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roads
. They should obey
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road
signs and traffic lights and never
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use
headphones or mobile phone when they are riding. And then they should
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use
arm signals when they are turning
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left
or right.
In addition
to these, They should wear helmet
correctly
and light
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clothing to
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improve
safety.

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, it may be a
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good
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if cyclists
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get
riding
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licence
for riding on main
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roads
when their
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lives
and rights on
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risks
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IELTS essay Some people say that cyclists should be tested before they are allowed to ride on main road

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
246 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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