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The health benefits of physical exercise are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly?

The health benefits of physical exercise are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly? 25y6k
Regular exercise is generally considered to be related to wellness. Moreover, there are numerous health benefits of physical exercise such as reduce the risk of heart diseases, help you control your weight, improve your mental health, and many other uncountable benefits. In spite of this, most of the people do not take exercise seriously. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how this problem can be alleviated. The reason of the lack of exercise seem to be quite simple. Firstly, technology make the people's life easy and comfortable which make them lazy. For example easy cooking, better and affordable transports system, and online shopping. The result of this is that they gained over weight which is further stop them to do exercise.
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be related
to wellness.
Moreover
, there are numerous health benefits of physical
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exercise
such as
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reduce
the
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risk
of heart diseases,
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help
you control your weight,
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your mental health, and
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many
other uncountable benefits.
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this, most of the
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people
do not take
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exercise
seriously
. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how this problem can
be alleviated
.

The reason of the lack of
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exercise
seem to be quite simple.
Firstly
, technology
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make
the
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people
's life easy and comfortable which
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make
them lazy.
For example
easy cooking, better and affordable transports system, and online shopping. The result of this is that they gained over weight which is
further
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stop
them to do
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exercise
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IELTS essay The health benefits of physical exercise are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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