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In spite of the advancements in agriculture.many people around the world go Hungary.Why is this case?What the can be done to adress this issue.

In spite of the advancements in agriculture. many people around the world go Hungary. Why is this case? What the can be done to adress this issue. GN5Lm
Although lots of betterment have been made in husbandry, yet thousands of homespiens find it hard to have two time meals in a day. Granding poverty and robust growth of population are the two culprits of this situation. However, to address this issue government must come forward with benevolent schemes for ther down trodders and generate employment opportunities for the potential candidates. Million of folks around the world, especially in third world nations living in object poverty. It is caused by various situations. Many of the world nations are fighting against amrs uprising, war and terrorism which are plague for this uplifting of any economy Syria for an instance, that has turned out to be a war zone and may Syrian have left their motherland in search of better living conditions and those, who are living find it hard to meet both the ends. Even, country like, India and China have no control over their birth rate. That has turned out to be a herculean task for the legislative to arrest this meance with the limited resources to provide proper nutritional food to all. Albeit, for the governing bodies, it becomes evident to come up with humanitarians lons to change the situation. It can provide grains and food source to those living under poverty free of cost or an subsidized rates so that, a healthy society can be maintained for all the walks of life. Besides this, legislative can strive herd to younglings but for all, who are able. It can be done by inviting foreign investors to establish their plants or manufacturing units in the local states. The big business houses like, Nestle, Google and Microsoft are some example that can help in making better employment picture in oriental countries with better economy status. To conclude, with any equivocation, farming has experienced great up saving but many individuals are yet to be beneficiaries of this development, they are still in the dire need of government support to fill their tummies.
Although lots of betterment have
been made
in husbandry,
yet
thousands of
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homespiens
find it
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hard
to have two time meals in a day.
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Granding
poverty and robust growth of population are the two culprits of this situation.
However
, to address this issue
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government
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must
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come
forward with benevolent schemes
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for ther
down
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trodders
and generate employment opportunities for the potential candidates.

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Million
of folks around the world,
especially
in third world nations
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living
in object poverty. It
is caused
by various situations.
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Many
of the world nations are fighting against
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amrs
uprising, war and terrorism which are plague for this uplifting of any economy Syria for an instance, that has turned out to be a war zone and may Syrian have
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left
their motherland in search of better
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living
conditions and those, who are
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living
find it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
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meet
both the ends. Even, country like, India and China have no control over their birth rate. That has turned out to be a
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herculean
task for the legislative to arrest this
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meance
with the limited resources to provide proper nutritional food to all.

Albeit, for the governing bodies, it becomes evident to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
up with humanitarians
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lons
to
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change
the situation. It can provide grains and food source to those
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living
under poverty free of cost or
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an
subsidized rates
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so
that, a healthy society can
be maintained
for all the walks of life.
Besides
this, legislative can strive herd to
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younglings
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but
for all, who are able. It can
be done
by inviting foreign investors to establish their plants or manufacturing units in the local states. The
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big
business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
like, Nestle, Google and Microsoft are
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some
example that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in making better employment picture in oriental countries with better economy status.

To conclude
, with any equivocation, farming has experienced great up saving
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
individuals are
yet
to be beneficiaries of this development, they are
still
in the dire need of
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government
support to fill their tummies.
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IELTS essay In spite of the advancements in agriculture. many people around the world go Hungary. Why is this case? What the can be done to adress this issue.

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