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Many people belive that social media have had a huge impact on society. Discuss

Many people belive that social media have had a huge impact on society. Discuss x25Ob
Over the past few years, social media especially Facebook have had a great impact to our personal as well as our social life. I strongly believe that these social networking has got positive effects I agree that it has also got negative impacts especially to our society. A few decades ago, people would never imagine about an old friend who lives in another continent or country can be connected closely to our life. On the contrary it has been made possible using these social networking sites. People with similar ideas form groups and come up with even better ideas to enhance the quality of life. The world has been much smaller when compared to the world a few decades before. While assessing the negatives of social media, nowadays young people always have a tendency to stick to their social networking friends which keeps them away from their social life. Local communities which were once believed to be the core of the future generations, no longer exists. People are being more and more introvert and find it difficult to face real life challenges. Live interactions can never be replaced by online interactions. To conclude, like any other developments’ technology is also developing at a much higher pace with its own advantages and disadvantages. Humans, being social beings should hold the capacity to limit the impact of social media in their life and make contributions to the society to which they belong. It is not to use social media but recommended to use it wisely.
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media
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social
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life
. I
strongly
believe that these
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social
networking has
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positive
effects I
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agree
that it has
also
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negative
impacts
especially
to our society.

A few decades ago,
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people
would never imagine about an
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old
friend who
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lives
in another continent or country can
be connected
closely
to our
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life
.
On the contrary
it has
been made
possible using these
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social
networking sites.
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People
with similar
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ideas
form groups and
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come
up with even better
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ideas
to enhance the quality of
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life
. The world has been much smaller when compared to the world a few decades
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before
.

While assessing the negatives of
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social
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media
, nowadays young
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people
always have a tendency to stick to their
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social
networking friends which
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keeps
them away from their
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social
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life
. Local communities which were once believed to be the core of the future generations, no longer exists.
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People
are being more and more introvert and find it difficult to face real
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life
challenges.
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Live
interactions can never
be replaced
by online interactions.

To conclude
, like any other developments’ technology is
also
developing at a much higher pace with its
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own
advantages and disadvantages. Humans, being
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social
beings should hold the capacity to limit the impact of
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social
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media
in their
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life
and
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make
contributions to the society to which they belong. It is not to
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use
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social
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media
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but
recommended to
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use
it
wisely
.
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IELTS essay Many people belive that social media have had a huge impact on society. Discuss

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
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