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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. 855d5
Nowadays, the world is interconnected with the "Internet". Almost everything a man needs can be bought through internet. Online shopping has become a booming business since the past decade. No doubt online business has effected the shops in the town. But, I don’t believe that it would lead to closing of all the shops, but the frequency of the visits to the shops may decline. Online shopping offers a flexibility to get everything delivered to their place without stepping outside. Although, everything can be ordered online, one cannot trust the quality until the final delivery. This is the drawback of the online shopping. For example, people prefer to buy fresh vegetables and groceries from the shops rather than online. However, online shopping saves a lot of travel and time which makes it a preferable one. The main attraction of online shopping is the discounts and cashbacks which is a big relief for the pockets. This is the main factor that hit the shops hard. Even the branded items can be found for very reasonable price online which is not possible in the store. There may be a need where the products must be used regularly. These type of products can be subscribed online based on need. People these days, go to shops, and see the products they like and will compare the rates online and will purchase it where they found it less. Besides all these many shops have come up online. This facility helps the business owner to expand their horizons both offline and in the web world.
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is interconnected
with the
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Internet
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. Almost everything a
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man
needs can be
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bought
through internet.
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Online
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shopping
has become a booming business since the past decade. No doubt
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online
business has effected the
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shops
in the town.
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But
, I don’t believe that it would lead to closing of all the
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shops
,
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but
the frequency of the visits to the
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shops
may decline.
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Online
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shopping
offers a flexibility to
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get
everything delivered to their place without stepping outside.

Although, everything can
be ordered
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online
, one cannot trust the quality until the final delivery. This is the drawback of the
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online
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shopping
.
For example
,
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people
prefer to
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buy
fresh vegetables and groceries from the
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shops
rather
than online.

However
,
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online
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shopping
saves
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a lot of
travel and time which
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makes
it a preferable one. The main attraction of
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online
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shopping
is the discounts and
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cashbacks
which is a
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big
relief for the pockets. This is the main factor that hit the
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shops
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hard
. Even the branded items can
be found
for
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very
reasonable price
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online
which is not possible in the store. There may be a need where the products
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must
be
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used
regularly
. These type of products can
be subscribed
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online
based on need.
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People
these days, go to
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shops
, and
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see
the products they like and will compare the rates
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online
and will
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purchase
it where they found it less.

Besides
all these
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many
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shops
have
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come
up
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online
. This facility
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helps
the business owner to expand their horizons both offline and in the web world.
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IELTS essay The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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