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Abortion, according to Havard Health Publishing (2019), removes pregnancy tissue, products of conception or the fetus and placenta (afterbirth) from the uterus. In 2009, Haddad & Nour claimed that unsafe foeticide causes 68, 000 women' death annually. Consequently, this report has been staggered community by the vast number of decease from abortion. Thence, whether the legal termination of unborn babies should be encouraged to the public has led to a controversial altercation. The first party protests the legalization of abortion because it is an inhuman behaviour and a signal of uncontrolled sensual involvement that drives sexually transmitted diseases to increase. In contrast, others support it as an individual right and a solution to unsafe abortion which may negatively affect women's health in the long river of time. On the one hand, abortion legalization is not encouraged since it presents mercilessness and sexual promiscuity. First, the intentional surgical ceasing of the life of an unborn baby attributes to murder crime. To be more specific, a human embryo is made up of cells with a unique genetic identity that remains unchanged throughout life upon conception. Accordingly, a fetus is likely an individual human with a soul from that moment of fertilization. Thence, eradicating innocent unborn children due to adults' mistakes means infanticide, which does not differ from homicide. Also, abortion eliminates the potential societal contribution of a future human being. For that reason, direct abortion is never a morally tolerable option. Second, it is a doubt that legal abortion will encourage erotic promiscuity, accompanied by an increase in sexually transmitted diseases. Unmarriageable carnal desires concern several religions since they sometimes are considered as a moral decline. Besides, there comes a raising in the rate of gonorrhoea and syphilis incidences when abortion, the penance to unwanted children, is allowed. As an illustration, in the US (1970), there were 600 072 reported cases of gonorrhoea and seven years since 1973, when abortion legalization, the numbers of this disease were 1 004 029 people (Statista, 2019). Correspondingly, this statistic partly demonstrates that the increase in 1980 related to sexual activities that likely followed legalization. It seems that legalizing abortion goes against moral code and ethics but goes for depraved sexual intercourse with which transmitted diseases incidences are significantly and positively correlated. On the other hand, legal abortion prevents hazards associated with illegal ones and protects fundamental human right. First, it is believed that licit abortion reduce the rate of ending a premature pregnancy in illegitimate healthcare facilities. To be more specific, unsafe abortion may cause pernicious consequences for women health, such as haemorrhage (heavy bleeding), infection, and abdominal organs. As an illustration, WHO (2021) shows that one in four women sustains temporary or lifelong disability requiring medical care from unsafe abortion. Besides, should a woman womb be damaged from abortion, permanent infertility will be a possible result. Thus, abortion legalization is expected to become a saviour for women health in the long run. To illustrate, the Center for Disease Control (1976) estimated that in the three years surrounding abortion legalization in the USA (1973), the number of illegal procedures in the country plummeted from around 130, 000 to 17, 000. The number of deaths coinciding with unlawful abortion also decreased from 39 to five in that same period. Second, legitimate abortion poses the liberty of an individual as well. In detail, the right to choose the way of life, behaviour or political views is believed to be the primary right. Accordingly, as the foetus exists inside the woman's uterus, that woman has the right to decide whether to abort the foetus or not. In other words, the decision to procure an abortion lies squarely on the pregnant woman who bears the burden of pregnancy and many hardships about its related matters. Going along with all options and alternatives, they have the right to choose what they consider is the best, regardless of their personal feelings or religious beliefs towards abortion. In the end, the controversial argument about abortion legalization may not entirely end even in the future. Although the legalization of feticide is considered an atrocity and promotion of unbridled sexual activities escorting infectious diseases, I think abortion should be allowed when it comes to long-term reproductive health and human right. In several justifiable cases, abortion legalization seems rational to intentionally have a miscarriage when the infants have experienced no pain. Further, should people want to restrict abortion access which is likely a reluctant final decision, sex education and responsibility lessons had better be widely propagandized.
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Abortion
, according to
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Havard
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Health
Publishing (2019), removes pregnancy tissue, products of conception or the fetus and placenta (afterbirth) from the uterus. In 2009, Haddad &
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Nour
claimed that
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unsafe
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foeticide
causes 68, 000 women' death
annually
.
Consequently
, this report has
been staggered
community by the vast
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number
of decease from
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abortion
. Thence, whether the legal termination of unborn babies should
be encouraged
to the public has led to a controversial altercation. The
first
party protests the
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legalization
of
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abortion
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because
it is an inhuman
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behaviour
and a signal of uncontrolled sensual involvement that drives
sexually
transmitted
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diseases
to increase.
In contrast
, others support it as an individual
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right
and a solution to
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unsafe
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abortion
which may
negatively
affect women's
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health
in the long river of time.

On the one hand,
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abortion
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legalization
is not encouraged since it presents mercilessness and
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sexual
promiscuity.
First
, the intentional surgical ceasing of the life of an unborn baby attributes to murder crime. To be more specific, a
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human
embryo
is made
up of cells with a unique genetic identity that remains unchanged throughout life upon conception.
Accordingly
, a fetus is likely an individual
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human
with a soul from that moment of fertilization. Thence, eradicating innocent unborn children due to adults' mistakes means infanticide, which does not differ from homicide.
Also
,
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abortion
eliminates the potential societal contribution of a future
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human
being. For that reason, direct
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abortion
is never a
morally
tolerable option. Second, it is a doubt that legal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abortion
will encourage erotic promiscuity, accompanied by an increase in
sexually
transmitted
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diseases
.
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Unmarriageable
carnal desires concern several religions since they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
are considered
as a moral decline.
Besides
, there
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comes
a raising in the rate of
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gonorrhoea
and syphilis incidences when
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abortion
, the penance to unwanted children, is
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allowed
. As an illustration, in the US (1970), there were 600 072 reported cases of
Possible spelling mistake found.
gonorrhoea
and seven years since 1973, when
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abortion
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legalization
, the
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numbers
of this
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disease
were 1 004 029
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people
(Statista, 2019).
Correspondingly
, this statistic partly demonstrates that the increase in 1980 related to
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sexual
activities that likely followed
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legalization
. It seems that legalizing
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abortion
goes against moral code and ethics
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but
goes for depraved
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sexual
intercourse with which transmitted
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diseases
incidences are
significantly
and
positively
correlated.

On the other hand
, legal
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abortion
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prevents
hazards associated with illegal ones and protects fundamental
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human
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right
.
First
, it
is believed
that licit
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abortion
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the rate of ending a premature pregnancy in illegitimate healthcare facilities. To be more specific,
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unsafe
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abortion
may cause pernicious consequences for women
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
, such as
Possible spelling mistake. 'haemorrhage' is British English.
haemorrhage
(heavy bleeding), infection, and abdominal organs. As an illustration, WHO (2021)
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shows
that one in four women sustains temporary or lifelong disability requiring medical care from
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unsafe
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abortion
.
Besides
, should a woman womb
be damaged
from
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abortion
, permanent infertility will be a possible result.
Thus
,
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abortion
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legalization
is
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expected
to become a
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saviour
for women
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health
in the long run. To illustrate, the Center for
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Disease
Control (1976) estimated that in the three years surrounding
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abortion
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legalization
in the USA (1973), the
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number
of illegal procedures in the country plummeted from around 130, 000 to 17, 000. The
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number
of deaths coinciding with unlawful
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abortion
also
decreased from 39 to five in that same period. Second, legitimate
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abortion
poses the liberty of an individual
as well
. In detail, the
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right
to choose the way of life,
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
or political views
is believed
to be the primary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
right
.
Accordingly
, as the
Do not mix variants of the same word ('foetus' and 'fetus') within a single text.
foetus
exists inside the woman's uterus, that woman has the
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right
to decide whether to abort the
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foetus
or not.
In other words
, the decision to procure an
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abortion
lies
squarely
on the pregnant woman who bears the burden of pregnancy and
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many
hardships about its related matters. Going along with all options and alternatives, they have the
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right
to choose what they consider is the best, regardless of their personal feelings or religious beliefs towards abortion.

In the
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end
, the controversial argument about
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abortion
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legalization
may not
entirely
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end
even in the future. Although the
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legalization
of
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feticide
is considered
an atrocity and promotion of unbridled
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sexual
activities escorting infectious
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diseases
, I
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think
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abortion
should be
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allowed
when it
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comes
to long-term reproductive
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health
and
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human
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right
. In several justifiable cases,
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abortion
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legalization
seems rational to
intentionally
have a miscarriage when the infants have experienced no pain.
Further
, should
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people
want to restrict
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abortion
access which is likely a reluctant final decision, sex education and responsibility lessons had better be
widely
propagandized.
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IELTS essay should abortion be banned?

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