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The graphic explains the frequency of people ate in the fast food restaurant in the USA during 2003 until 2013.

The graphic explains the frequency of people ate in the fast food restaurant in the USA during 2003 until 2013. eKyWx
The graphic explains the frequency of people ate in the fast food restaurant in the USA during 2003 until 2013. In 2003, the highest frequency of people who ate fast food was on the once a week category, for about 32%. Followed by 1-2 times a month for about 30%. The percentage of people who never ate fast food was 5%, and who ate fast food everyday was below 5%. In 2006, the proportion of people who ate faste food 1 time per week was escalated to 33%. Meanwhile, the people who ate 1-2 times per month decreased to 25%. Overall, the proportion of people who ate fast food in 2006 was rised in compare to 2003. In 2013, the ratio of people who ate fast food was the same in comparison with 2006. The portion of people who ate fast food once a week down for about 5%. In the contrary, the percentage on once or twice a month category was increased significantly to 33%.
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restaurant in the USA during 2003 until 2013.

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was on the once a week category, for about 32%. Followed by 1-2 times a month for about 30%. The percentage of
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never
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was 5%, and
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was below 5%.

In 2006, the proportion of
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faste
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1 time per week
was escalated
to 33%. Meanwhile, the
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people
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1-2 times per month decreased to 25%.
Overall
, the proportion of
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people
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ate
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fast
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food
in 2006 was
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in compare to 2003.

In 2013, the ratio of
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people
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fast
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food
was the same
in comparison
with 2006. The portion of
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people
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once a week down for about 5%. In the contrary, the percentage on once or twice a month category
was increased
significantly
to 33%.
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IELTS essay The graphic explains the frequency of people ate in the fast food restaurant in the USA during 2003 until 2013.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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