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The given bar chart demonstrates the percentage of accessibility to the internet in a European country comparing urban/suburban and rural areas of the country over 6-year period starting from 2011. As can be seen, household internet access went up dramatically in both areas, however, it was considerably higher in urban/suburban homes. In 2011, approximately 14% of urban/suburban areas had internet, while a tiny proportion of rural homes had it. By the following year, accessibility of internet in urban/suburban had increased to 30%, whereas in rural areas had slightly growth to 6%. In 2013 and 2014, having internet in urban/suburban homes had exactly 20% rise from 30% to 50%, when the growth of internet access in rural areas had been 10% in 2013 and had a tiny rise up to 15% in 2014. between 2014 and 2015 the internet access in urban/suburban homes maintained constantly to 50%, also in 2016 it went up to near 60%. On the other hand, the growth of internet access in rural areas by these 3 years had been substantial and had reached more than 30%.
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bar chart demonstrates the percentage of accessibility to the internet in a European country comparing
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urban/suburban
and
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rural
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areas
of the country over 6-year period starting from 2011. As can be
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seen
, household internet
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access
went up
dramatically
in both
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areas
,
however
, it was
considerably
higher in
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urban/suburban
homes.

In 2011, approximately 14% of
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urban/suburban
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areas
had internet, while a tiny proportion of
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rural
homes had it. By the following year, accessibility of internet in
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urban/suburban
had increased to 30%, whereas in
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rural
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areas
had
slightly
growth to 6%. In 2013 and 2014, having internet in
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urban/suburban
homes had exactly 20% rise from 30% to 50%, when the growth of internet
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access
in
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rural
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areas
had been 10% in 2013 and had a tiny rise up to 15% in 2014.

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between
2014 and 2015 the internet
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access
in
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urban/suburban
homes maintained
constantly
to 50%,
also
in 2016 it went up to near 60%.
On the other hand
, the growth of internet
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access
in
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by these 3 years had been substantial and had reached more than 30%.
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Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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