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Exchange culture in the world

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Nowadays, due to globalization and cultural communication have become more ubiquitous on a global scale. It has many opportunities for the development of enhanced comprehension of diversity. Cultural exchange helps people to interrelate with and gain knowledge from others. We are able to evaluate the value of our country. Many countries are organizing a lot of changes of cross-cultural activities is to gain mutual respect and knowledge of the world. As you know, today, the new generation of our country and the world is students. They are talented and friendly. So the nations will create opportunities for them to enhance all their skills and benefit both individuals and the local community. For instance a number of investors have invested a significant part in growing education. They provide numerous options and a high rate of investment in education. Creating a number of scholarships so that students can venture into new nations to learn about their culture, language. Moreover, They completely combine between developing nations. On the other hand, I believe that there are various ways to preserve and promote wonderful traditions through our citizens. The exchange of cultures between countries aids our development in many fields of business, tourism. In international relations, the cultural content becomes even more crucial because it is related to benefit of each country. Currently, manifestations of cultural exchange can easily be found in business, based on the insights gained from cultural exchanges, many companies take part in our trade. Such as, KFC, McDonald, Honda, etc applying cultural exchange in business activities. In addition it is creating an opportunity for us to absorb food culture, products from other countries. in conclusion, I completely argue that the advantages of cultural exchange and activities
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that students can venture into new nations to learn about their culture, language.
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of cultures between
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aids our development in
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fields of business, tourism. In international relations, the
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content becomes even more crucial
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in business activities. In
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IELTS essay Exchange culture in the world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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