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The supplied bar graph compares the proportion of juvenile rates in the use of assorted indoor activities in four diverse countries. Overall, it is lucid that the preferability of computer games usage has been recorded by for highest figures. By contrast, it is interesting to note that the lowest figures of youngsters’ house activities have contained reading in provided graph. Looking at the graph in more detail, the highest figure playing computer games by adolescences has shown its peak percentage in Nigeria with 60. By the same token, Sudan and Malaysia have shared an equal proportion in computer games usage by 50. Contrary, China has stayed behind in that type of indoor activity by 40% than others. However, reading activates consumed by teenagers have been recorded as the lowest range, it hits its highest percentage in Malaysia by 20. It is worth noticing that board games activities have been played mostly in Sudan with 30%, while this proportion in Malaysia and China merely have stood 5% less than it. Intriguingly, watching TV, one of the indoor activities recommendations by children has displayed the same percentage both countries by 30.

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