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Globalisation brings nation together then, what is positive and negative effects

Globalisation brings nation together then, what is positive and negative effects KlX89
The importance of globalisation brings nation together which was always debatable has now become controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my perspective, the former proportion appears to be more rational. This essay will further explain both positive and negative effects of this trend. There are myraid of merits which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one steams from the fact that, when the availability of other nations product in particular nation then, the multide of that nation easily buy import product. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that, if any product available in wide variety as well as, quality then, citizen of that country esaily choose their preferable product from market. Needless to say, all these merits are stand in a good stead. However, there are some pitfals that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that, when the import product is available in market then, automatically masses can attract by that product. Consicuently, the local marketeres get into financial loss because, there monthly or weekly sale would be decrease. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of nations together are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
The importance of
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globalisation
brings
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nation
together which was always debatable has
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now
become controversial with
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many
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people
claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my perspective, the former proportion appears to be more rational. This essay will
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explain
both
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positive
and
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effects of this trend.

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argument
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the most preponderant one steams from the fact that, when the availability of other
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nations
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product
in particular
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nation
then, the
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multide
of that
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nation
easily
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buy
import
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product
. Another pivotal aspect of this
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argument
is that, if any
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product
available in wide variety
as well
as, quality then, citizen of that country
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esaily
choose their preferable
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product
from market. Needless to say, all these merits are stand in a
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good
stead.

However
, there are
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some
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pitfals
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argument
and which can
certainly
overwhelm the potential influence of this trend
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but
one of the most alarming one is that, when the import
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product
is available in market then,
automatically
masses can attract by that
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product
.
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Consicuently
, the local
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marketeres
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get
into financial loss
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because
, there monthly or weekly sale would be decrease.
Hence
, it is apparent why
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many
are against this trend.

According to the
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arguments
aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of
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nations
together are instrumental
indeed
.
Nevertheless
, the potential drawbacks should not
be overlooked
either.
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IELTS essay Globalisation brings nation together then, what is positive and negative effects

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  American English
4 paragraphs
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