These days most of the house chores are accomplished by machines instead of utilising workforce. I believe it is the most substantial improvement as the tasks are done promptly, whereas some people are against it and says that it is unhealthy.
On the one hand, utilisation of gadgets to perform household tasks is quite productive as one can save ample of time by finishing it swiftly and in turn get to spend time either with their loved ones or practising their hobbies. To illustrate this, by the usage of washing machine instead of using hands to wash the clothes would make much difference in terms of time-saving. Similarly, perfection could be observed at the same time. In a recent survey, it has posted that 40% of the female population get to be satisfied with the usage of electronic gadgets as it is letting them participate in entertaining activities.
On the other hand, some people regarding the replacement of handwork with machinery as a negative development as it encourages laziness. To illustrate this, with the use of vacuum cleaners, minimal body moments were involved, and human tends to get clumsy. In other words, health issues get an invite due to lack of body moments. In a news article, it was stated that the orthopaedic patient's rate had doubled significantly due to ongoing automotive.
In conclusion, the invention of machines has made ones easy, but the proportion of health issues is inclined at the same rate. However, due to advancement in computers has made the human life more productive.
These days most of the
house
chores
are accomplished
by machines
instead
of
utilising
workforce. I believe it is the most substantial improvement as the tasks
are done
promptly
, whereas
some
people
are against it and says that it is unhealthy.
On the one hand,
utilisation
of gadgets to perform household tasks is quite productive as one can save ample of time by finishing it
swiftly
and in turn
get
to spend time either with their
loved
ones
or
practising
their hobbies. To illustrate this, by the usage of washing machine
instead
of using hands to wash the clothes would
make
much difference in terms of time-saving.
Similarly
, perfection could
be observed
at the same time. In a recent survey, it has posted that 40% of the female population
get
to
be satisfied
with the usage of electronic gadgets as it is letting them participate in entertaining activities.
On the other hand
,
some
people
regarding the replacement of handwork with machinery as a
negative
development as it encourages laziness. To illustrate this, with the
use
of vacuum cleaners, minimal body moments
were involved
, and human tends to
get
clumsy.
In other words
, health issues
get
an
invite
due to lack of body moments. In a news article, it
was stated
that the
orthopaedic
patient's rate had doubled
significantly
due to ongoing automotive.
In
conclusion, the invention of machines has made
ones
easy,
but
the proportion of health issues
is inclined
at the same rate.
However
, due to advancement in computers has made the human life more productive.
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