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The graph below show information about the staff of Shore Hotel from 1975 to 2010.

The graph below show information about the staff of Shore Hotel from 1975 to 2010. L312K

This table below demonstrates the percentage of qualification in staffing from 1975 to 2010. There are 2 topics that are mentioned in the table: language and work experience. Overall, the language qualification column has increased but not so much. On the other hand, the speaking languages column increased drastically. The work experience column peaks and falls slightly year by year. When we have a closer look, we can see that language qualification fluctuates a little bit and it remains stable in 1995 and 2005. But after all, there is a slight decrease in 2010 from 21% to 20%. Following the needs of speaking two languages, it has increased about 2% to 14% per year. Surprisingly, at the end of 2010, it reached 79% of staff who speak two or more languages, which is a huge breakthrough. The trend of previous work experience represented a remaining virtual change in the period. In 1985, there was a peak at 78%, and this was followed by a sudden fall to 67% five year later. The figure then fluctuated over the next 15 years

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