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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed.

The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. dDGVE
Cutting-edge, few times masses lost thiex Job, this reason to a regime should devote every citizen a fundamental money thus have enough money to live on, if they are, unemployed. I agree with this statement and give my opinion. To begin with some times in over population. in job this mecson to owner decline the employes, because they not provide salary. To elaborate it, in an industrial en factories loaded people work thier and some reason owner suffer the lose, at that time there they remove a workers. Moreover, because don't provide salary. To epitome, last year was pencamic and exuberunt in the whole world, at was time apilo company remove the plethora of unemployed. Thus, this reason to government have to announce the this kind of basic income for needed. person. Further more in bad situation not only need the money but also care family members. On other side, some time person matase in job, because company not provide a a salury according is abilities and strenghnes. In other words, & few time in country diffrent kind of person do the job. But also, dearth money. Apart from that some times in job owner provide salary. However; this Salary not enough according cleverness. For instance, couple of year ago in US. et ample of people did the strike for Job according strengh, in this strike aim was pa devote salary according ablity. Hence, government and authorities should the announce the e need for helpers is other Sectors this reason to individuals. go thier and choice better For themselevel. a perfect shreem if To conclude, crowed population decline and organized new sectors. Moreover, devote a Salary according employ, and this reason to government give few income for d the whole citizens.
Cutting-edge, few
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masses lost
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thiex
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, this
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reason
to a regime should devote every citizen a fundamental
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money
thus
have
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enough
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money
to
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live
on, if they are, unemployed. I
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agree
with this statement and give my opinion.

To
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begin
with
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some
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times
in over population.
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in
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job
this
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mecson
to owner decline the
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employes
,
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because
they not
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provide
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salary
. To elaborate it, in an industrial en factories loaded
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people
work
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thier
and
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some
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reason
owner suffer the
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lose
, at that
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time
there they remove
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a workers
.
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,
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because
don't
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provide
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salary
. To epitome, last year was
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pencamic
and
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exuberunt
in the whole world, at was
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time
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apilo
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company
remove the plethora of unemployed.
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, this
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reason
to
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government
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have to
announce
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the this
kind of basic income for needed.
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person
.
Further
more in
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bad
situation not
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only
need the
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money
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but
also
care family members.

On other side,
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some
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time
person
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matase
in
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job
,
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because
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company
not
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provide
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a a
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salury
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according
is abilities and
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strenghnes
.
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time
in country
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diffrent
kind of person do the
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job
.
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also
, dearth
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money
. Apart from that
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some
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times
in
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job
owner
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provide
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salary
.
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; this
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Salary
not
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enough
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according
cleverness.
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,
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couple of
year ago in US.
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et
ample of
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people
did the strike for
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Job
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according
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strengh
, in this strike aim was pa devote
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salary
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according
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ablity
.
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,
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government
and authorities should the
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announce
the e need for helpers is other Sectors this
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reason
to individuals.
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go
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thier
and choice better For
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themselevel
.
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a
perfect
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shreem
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if


To conclude
, crowed population decline and organized new sectors.
Moreover
, devote a
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Salary
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according
employ, and this
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reason
to
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government
give
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few income
for d the whole citizens.
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IELTS essay The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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