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In some countries people choose to live alone in recent years what are the reasons it is positive or negative development

In some countries people choose to live alone in recent years what are the reasons it is positive or negative development YmO2V
It is commonly seen that in current time as long as prefer to live alone there are a lot of reasons behind this Trend and I believe it as a positive development Fast the first causes that due to globalisation owing to which competition is probably freighting to put it simply individuals have to go outside from the home for study and work purpose people want to live in urban area because there is areas provide extremely good facilities which is not given in moral areas As a result citizens is left only one up in option to leave their family for getting success in addition students want to complete their studies in Big Universities and colleges that are located in big cities as well as asas a result citizens is left only one up in option to leave their family for getting success in addition students want to complete their studies in Big Universities and colleges that are located in big cities as well as as parents to live modern life Hence they live alone without their family keeping in mind the trend of going abroad it would not be incorrect to Stole that youngsters towards job opportunities education system and also freedom which is easiest obtain and development countries and young one also want to get experience and explore the new places and culture doesn't turn people like to live alone because the lifestyle of Western attract the students Considering the positive site living alone has the best way to become independent person to simplify in when you live alone when they have to take their responsibilities on their shoulder inhabitants do delete gently for the bearing their expense of their life this approach not only learn how to live life but also not depend on other person when it comes to family when parents do job and earn have some amount of money sooral values and discipline For example a survey was revealed that which was conducted by higher authorities of the education field proposed that 30% students have acquired bright future who are living alone Hence people can more score to increase the confidence of their juveniles In conclusion no doubt there are numerous reasons of live alone Saccha globalisation and welfare countries however overall it is only good trend for the society which help of students to become independent
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globalisation
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simply
individuals
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have to
go outside from the home for study and work purpose
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people
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want
to
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live
in urban area
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because
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provide
extremely
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good
facilities which is not
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given
in moral areas

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citizens is
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left
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only
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family
for getting success
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students
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want
to complete their studies in
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a result citizens is
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leave
their
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family
for getting success
in addition
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students
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want
to complete their studies in
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Big
Universities and colleges that
are located
in
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big
cities
as well
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parents to
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live
modern life
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they
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live
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alone
without their
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family
keeping in mind the trend of going abroad it would not be incorrect to

Stole that youngsters towards job opportunities education system and
also
freedom which is easiest obtain and development countries and young one
also
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want
to
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get
experience and explore the new places and culture doesn't turn
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people
like to
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live
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alone
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because
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students
Considering the
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positive
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living
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alone
has the best way to become independent person to simplify in when you
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live
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alone
when they
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have to
take their responsibilities on their shoulder inhabitants do delete
gently
for the bearing their expense of their life this approach not
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only
learn how to
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live
life
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not depend on other person when it
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family
when parents do job and earn have
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some
amount of money
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sooral
values and discipline
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a survey
was revealed
that which
was conducted
by higher authorities of the education field proposed that 30%
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students
have acquired bright future who are living
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alone
Hence
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people
can more score to increase the confidence of their juveniles
In conclusion
no doubt there are numerous reasons of
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live
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alone
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Saccha
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globalisation
and welfare countries
however
overall
it is
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only
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good
trend for the society which
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help
of
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students
to become independent
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IELTS essay In some countries people choose to live alone in recent years what are the reasons it is positive or negative development

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
393 words
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