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Now days many people interaction has changed because of technology. In what ways has affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development.

Now days many people interaction has changed because of technology. In what ways has affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development. rkd8J
Yes, Due to the invention of various technologies the direct interaction between the people has been minimized. The invention of different kinds of gadgets like phones, computers and laptops and along with them with new app technologies like Wats app, Facebook twitter the people are not directly communicating with each other. The virtual communication has been increasing from no of days. Along with this the humans are not visiting even their parents for festivals due these technologies. The new generations are not even knowing the relationships that are having with the different kinds of relatives, the old cultures are being fade away and the significance of different are not even known by our young people. They are just playing games with mobiles, computers and so on, the old games like snake and ladder are not known by many children. The mother tongue is also being slowly vanish because many of the childs are speaking in english. Now-a days the speciemens are not even interacting with the neighbours due to that there is alack of communication in between various people. Every relation is being disturbed by technology, for e. x; if there are four people in a house, every one is having a mobile, so that each person are spending time in their gadgets not even talking to each other. In my point of view development of technology is good vibe for developing our country but it should not effect one's personal life and it should not collapse the life of an individual or a group. So, I would like to conclude that the technologies are developed in order to develop our country in a smart way by reducing the workload not to distrub our relations due to that is becoming negative development.
Yes,
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Due
to the invention of various
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technologies
the direct interaction between the
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
has
been minimized
.

The invention of
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different
kinds of gadgets like phones, computers and laptops and along with them with new app
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technologies
like
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Wats
app, Facebook
The singular proper name 'Facebook' must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "twitters", "twittered".
twitter
the
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people
are not
directly
communicating with each other. The virtual communication has been increasing from
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no
of days.

Along with this the humans are not visiting even their parents for festivals
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due
these
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technologies
. The new generations are not even knowing the relationships that are having with the
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different
kinds of relatives, the
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old
cultures are being fade away and the significance of
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different
are not even known by our young
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people
. They are
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just
playing games with mobiles, computers and
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so
on, the
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old
games like snake and ladder are not known by
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many
children.

The mother tongue is
also
being
slowly
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vanish
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because
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many
of the
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childs
are speaking in
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english
.
This word is normally spelled as one.
Now-a days
the
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speciemens
are not even interacting with the
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neighbours
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due
to that there is alack of communication in between various
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

Every relation is
being disturbed
by
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technology
, for e. x; if there are four
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people
in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, every one is having a mobile,
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so
that each person are spending time in their gadgets not even talking to each other.

In my point of view development of
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technology
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
vibe for developing our country
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but
it should not
Did you mean "affect"?
effect
one's personal life and it should not collapse the life of an individual or a group.

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So
, I would like
to conclude
that the
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technologies
are developed
in order to develop our country
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in a smart way
by reducing the workload not to
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distrub
our relations
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due
to
that is
becoming
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
development.
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IELTS essay Now days many people interaction has changed because of technology. In what ways has affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development.

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