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Evening activities in my hometown

Evening activities in my hometown BWXJm

After a long day with a number of fatigued things, for me, the evening is a wonderful time for me as well as makes me feel free. In this period, I have to take the academic course, solve a lot of arguments, submit a great deal of exercise before the deadline time, so I am mostly busy the whole day. Therefore, in order to recover the energy and stay healthy, I usually do exercise like playing football, swimming, jogging, …. and especially, riding the bicycle. Occasionally, I have more free time after 5 pm, thus, I and my friends plan to ride around my town until the sun completely sets in the West. After that, I bye my friends at the end of the village entrance, and on the route to my house, I also help my mom buy some things in a grocery store near here. I feel quite weary due to the fact that I have ridden energetically, nevertheless, this activity makes me stronger and prevents me from getting sick. The evening of me is like that.

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