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the government should provide free health care

the government should provide free health care k6bBR
The health factor plays a magnitude role in developing a country. It is argued by some that each person should be responsible for their health. However, in my opinion, the residents must be provided free health care by their government. There is a wide array of reasons that account for the significance of a free medical system. The major reason is shown ethnic and class equality. Hospitals and related service systems are built from the tax that is collected by different income levels society. Therefore, they have a justifiable right to use them. The second advantage, if the government has a free health system, their citizens will access advanced conditions, especially cancer requiring high treatment conditions. In addition, free medical also provides better treatment and is suitable for the poor, who cannot afford the expensive expenditure. Another benefit, severe health issues can be diagnosed immediately, and consequently, the diseases can be treated properly. The government should ensure can address challenges to provide the best health system for their citizens. In conclusion, although some people may claim that the government is not the only responsibility, I still strongly believe that they need to provide a free medical system for their citizens.
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that each person should be responsible for their
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health
.
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, in my opinion, the residents
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must
be provided
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free
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health
care by their
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government
.

There is a wide array of reasons that account for the significance of a
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free
medical
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system
. The major reason
is shown
ethnic and
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class
equality. Hospitals and related service
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systems
are built
from the tax that
is collected
by
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different
income levels society.
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, they have a justifiable right to
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use
them.

The second advantage, if the
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government
has a
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free
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health
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system
, their citizens will access advanced conditions,
especially
cancer requiring high treatment conditions.
In addition
,
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free
medical
also
provides better treatment and is suitable for the poor, who cannot afford the expensive expenditure. Another benefit, severe
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health
issues can
be diagnosed
immediately, and
consequently
, the diseases can
be treated
properly
. The
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government
should ensure can address challenges to provide the best
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health
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system
for their citizens.

In conclusion
, although
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some
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people
may claim that the
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government
is not the
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only
responsibility, I
still
strongly
believe that they need to provide a
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free
medical
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system
for their citizens.
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IELTS essay the government should provide free health care

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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